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    aks - "Aks"

    Last edited by Hijaab; 14-04-2011 at 10:00 AM.

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    Default Re: "Aks"

    v nice....
    buhat khub ...
    buhat acha likha aap nay......
    mysign - "Aks"

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    Default Re: "Aks"

    hmmm

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    Default Re: "Aks"

    wsalam
    bhot acha lkha hai
    u kabhi kabhi he likhti
    leken awesome likhi ho
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    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    hijab kamal dhamal
    نہ جانے ہم کہاں گم ہو چکے ہیں ....
    جو ممکن ہو -- تو ہم کو ڈهونڈ لاٶ ...

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    wah bhut khoob so nyc sis....

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    bohat acha likha hijaab, but last line repeat hone k bajae ik ham qafia misra aur add hota .

    other then that concept boht acha hay aur boht pyra likha.. keep it up

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    Default Re: "Aks"

    Quote Originally Posted by Halaku Khan View Post
    bohat acha likha hijaab, but last line repeat hone k bajae ik ham qafia misra aur add hota .

    other then that concept boht acha hay aur boht pyra likha.. keep it up
    bro
    actually mein ne bhi aisa he soucha tha but koi suitable word nahi mila

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    mujhe ik naam deta hia
    mujhey jeevan daan deta hia.

    i dnt know ke deta hai sahi b lage ga ke nahi.
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    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    bohat khubsurat
    rain?t1311176404 - "Aks"


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