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    asking Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

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    "Oh Allah, Forgive my Sins and give me strength that

    I can stay on Siraat-al-Mustaqeem - Aameen"


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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    salaam

    Bahraam saahib kii ek aur umda Ghazal pesh karne ke liye maiN aapkaa mutashakkir huN sabhii ash'aar achchhe haiN. chand ek baat arz karnaa chaahuuNgaa agar qubool uftaad.

    -sab se pahle to jis format meN aapne Ghazal likhii hai vo Ghazal kii format ba-yak nazar nahiiN. aapne aise likhaa hai jaise yeh
    qit'a kii ho.

    -imle kii chand ek aGhlaat haiN jaise lafz-e-zehn Harf ZE se nahiiN bal k ZAAL se hai

    -chand ek maqaamaat par kitaabat kii aGhlaat nazar aayiiN mujhe jaise:

    a) phir yuN huaa k jaise dil bhii thaa aabla paa saa
    yahaN "paa" izaafii ma'loom paRtaa hai.

    b) ab sach kaheN to, yaaro! hamko Khabar tak na thii
    is misr'e meN "Khabar aur tak" saath hone se luknat dar-pesh aatii hai...ya'nii tasalsul meN aRchan aatii hai aur zabaan TooTti hai iskii adaayegii meN

    shukria.
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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    Wa janab...kia bat hay....Ap tu..Waqi daad k mustahaq niklay....waisay...you betterly know...k ye koi mera apna share tu hay nhe..albata sure k hoskta hay is kuch cheezaiin aisi honi thee jo aap farmarhay hain..mgr miaray pas jis tarah available tha same as it is may design kia tha...rest....thank you for browsing us you welcome tkc and keep up smile
    "Oh Allah, Forgive my Sins and give me strength that

    I can stay on Siraat-al-Mustaqeem - Aameen"


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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    hmm nice
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    good one

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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    text mix ho raha hai...thek hai bas
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    nice

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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    niceeeeeeeeee
    My prayer, my offering, my life and my death are all for Allah SWT, the
    Lord of all the worlds..

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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    very nice poetry indeed... thanks for sharing...

    design kuch clear nahi... wording, colors & image kuch bhi apas main match nahi karraha... yun lag raha hai jaisay 3 roothay hoyey logoon ko aik saath bitha diya ho...
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    Default Re: Barson k baad daikha ek shakhs dilruba sa!

    Quote Originally Posted by Hashmat Usmani View Post
    salaam

    Bahraam saahib kii ek aur umda Ghazal pesh karne ke liye maiN aapkaa mutashakkir huN sabhii ash'aar achchhe haiN. chand ek baat arz karnaa chaahuuNgaa agar qubool uftaad.

    -sab se pahle to jis format meN aapne Ghazal likhii hai vo Ghazal kii format ba-yak nazar nahiiN. aapne aise likhaa hai jaise yeh
    qit'a kii ho.

    -imle kii chand ek aGhlaat haiN jaise lafz-e-zehn Harf ZE se nahiiN bal k ZAAL se hai

    -chand ek maqaamaat par kitaabat kii aGhlaat nazar aayiiN mujhe jaise:

    a) phir yuN huaa k jaise dil bhii thaa aabla paa saa
    yahaN "paa" izaafii ma'loom paRtaa hai.

    b) ab sach kaheN to, yaaro! hamko Khabar tak na thii
    is misr'e meN "Khabar aur tak" saath hone se luknat dar-pesh aatii hai...ya'nii tasalsul meN aRchan aatii hai aur zabaan TooTti hai iskii adaayegii meN

    shukria.
    Bahram Sahib ki GHazal nahi hai yeh
    Faraz Ahmed ki hai or jo unhon ne likha hai sahi hai Main ne Ahmed farz ko kaha bhi tha Aap se puch lo per woh nahi mane
    nice sharing
    Keep it up
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