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    Asalam u Alaikum

    sab khariyat ..ok then gud:ee:

    is bar mein ne socha k q na kuch alag kiya jaye
    is bar sab ko wo nazm ya ghazal share karni jo ap jab parhte hain to ap ko lagta hai ye hum per likhi gayi hai jo ap ki zaat ki akasi karti ho yani ap ko aesa feel ho..

    in short ap ko nazm ya ghazal khud ko dedicate karni hai nd saath mein REASON k ap ko aesa q laga k ye poetry ap per hai??
    ya fir ap ne ye poetry khud ko dedicate q ki??
    simple sa reason dena hai limit 2 lines hain isse zayid ka reason mein qaboolna hi nahi



    Rules..
    last date 21st May hai..
    same nd edit ki hui sharing accept nai ho gi..
    ik member ik hi bar sharing kar sakta hai



    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Reason\

    Zindagi men hamesha har kam apny dil ke kehny per kia hy..Boht kuch khoya bi hai iski waja se per adat nahi badli meney apni

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    Last edited by Nida_Ali_Nido; 02-05-2011 at 10:19 AM.

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    Sorry men jaldi jaldi likhti na to typing men mistake ker deti

    ab edit to ker nahi sakti

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    jee kar lein edit

    nd very nice hai

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    Quote Originally Posted by SenoriTa View Post
    jee kar lein edit

    nd very nice hai

    Mene theek ker k likh dia hai

    Thanko sani behna


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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    "ya sub chizain may bohat miss karti hon
    kun kay ab aesa kuch nahi hay"


    *Bachpan!*

    Jab yaad aata hai to yaad aate hain,
    woh pyare se din, woh suhaani shaamein,
    Jab saahilon par PAPA ka haath thaame,
    Ghanton ghooma karte thae....

    Wo MAA ki goud,
    Jisme apna sabkuch bhoolkar
    Bekhabar, ghanton soya kartay thay

    DADA DADI ki woh kahaniyan,
    Jiske Shahzadah aur pariyon mein,
    Khud ko dhoondha karte thay

    Woh AAM ka DARAKHT,
    Jiski chhanoun tale, doston ke saath
    milkar, khoob shararat karte thay

    waqt beet gaya
    aur kho gaya kahin...

    Woh SAAHIL...
    Jo aaj bhi mujhe aawaz deta hai,

    Woh MAA ki goud...
    Jo mujhe dhoondh rahi hai,
    Magar jisme sone ki ab mujhe fursat nahi hai,

    DADA DADI ki woh kahaniyan...
    Jo ab khamosh ho gayi hain,

    Kabhi kabhi khwabon mein dhundhli lakeer ki manind
    Dastak de jaati hain...

    Woh saare DOST jaane kahan chalay gaye...
    Mutthhi mein band ret ki tarah phisal gaye,

    Kho gaye jaane kahan...
    Woh masti bhare din, woh bekhauf raatein;
    Woh aasmaan choone ki tamanna, woh be-takallufi ki baatein,
    Jab har sapna haseen tha, har lamha rangeen tha;

    Aaj kyon har manzar surkh-syah-safaied-sa dikhta hai
    Kya duniya badal gayi hai ya main badal gayii hoon

    Ab ehsaas hota hai

    KE SHAYAD MAIN BADI HO GAYI HOON...
    KE SHAYAD MAIN BADI HO GAYI HOON...

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    comp ka idea bohat acha hay saniya/up
    meri sharing kuch zaida hi bari ho gai hay

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    nai its ok
    dekh lo mera daamg kitna chalta

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    Chalo ik baar phir se ajnabii ban jaayeiN ham donoN!

    Na maiN tum se koi ummeed rakhouN dil-navaazii ki
    Na tum meri taraf dekho Ghalat-andaaz nazroN se

    Na mere dil ki dhaRkan laRkhaRaaye merii baatoN meiN
    Na zaahir ho tumhaari kash-ma-kash kaa raaz nazroN se

    TumheiN bhi koi uljhan rokti hai pesh-qadmi se
    Mujhe bhi log kahte haiN k ye jalve paraaye haiN

    Mere hamraah bhi rusvaaiyaaN haiN mere maazi ki
    Tumhaare saath bhi guzri hui raatoN ke saaye haiN

    Taarruf rog ho jaaye to usko bhoolna behtar
    Taalluq bhoj ban jaaye to usko toRna acha

    Vo afsana jise aNjaam tak lanaa na ho mumkin
    Use ik Khoobsoorat moR dekar choRna acha


    Reason: The poetry says it all.

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    Default Re: *~SOS competition 4 May 2011~*

    !کہا تھا ناں
    مجھے تم اِس طرح سوتے ہوئے مت چھوڑ کرجانا
    مجھے بے شک جگا دینا
    بتا دینا
    محبت کے سفر میں ساتھ میرے چل نہیں سکتیں
    جدائی میں? ہجر میں? ساتھ میرے جل نہیں سکتیں
    تمہیں رستہ بدلنا ہے
    مری حد سے نکلنا ہے
    تمہیں کس بات کا ڈر تھا
    تمہیں جانے نہیں دیتا
    کہیں پہ قید کر لیتا
    ارے پگلی!
    محبت کی طبیعت میں
    زبردستی نہیں ہوتی
    جسے رستہ بدلنا ہو? اُسے رستہ بدلنے سے
    جسے حد سے نکلنا ہو اُسے حد سے نکلنے سے
    نہ کوئی روک پایا ہے
    نہ کوئی روک پائے گا
    تمہیں کس بات کا ڈر تھا
    مجھے بے شک جگا دیتے
    میں تم کو دیکھ ہی لیتا
    تمہیں کوئی دعا دیتا
    کم از کم یوں تو نہ ہوتا
    مرے ساتھی حقیقت ہے
    تمہارے بعد کھونے کے لیے کچھ بھی نہیں باقی
    مگر کھونے سے ڈرتا ہوں
    میں اب سونے سے ڈرتا ہوں

    Mujy lagta hai k ye mary liya blkul sahi hai.
    kyun k main b aksar apni family ko sota howa chord kar chala jata hon.

    Last edited by ~**IRFAN ~**; 13-05-2011 at 12:45 PM. Reason: reason add ki hai

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