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    cute Urdu Writers Competition May 2011





    is bar comp zara alag hia ap ko karna yeh hia ke hum ap ko koi topic nahi de rahe
    balkey app ko likhne ka moqa diya jaye tu ap kis topic per likhey gai ?
    yeh ab app ki marzi ke ap kiya likhna pasand karey gia tu janab apni marzi ke
    kisi b topic per choti si tehrer likh dijeye



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    1 ... Aik member aik he bar Share Karsakta hai.
    2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.
    3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 May hai.

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    Asssalamualikum

    Hum Sab Jante Hain K Parday ki Islam main Kya Ahmiyat Hai , aur Allah k Fazal Se Hum Parday main hi ghur se nikalti hain ,leken main jan na chahti hon k aakhir Parday main larki kyon Sataai jati hai? usay galat kisam k isharay kyon musool hute hain ? larki jab beparda nikalti hai aur phir satai jaye tu kaha jata hai k woh khud dawat de rhi hai , leken jb woh Allah k hudood ki pabandi karti hoi ghur se nikalti hai tu us hudood ko khatam karne walay shaitani log kyon ja-ba-ja hute hain ? Kaash k yeh log samjh jayen k is tarhan ki razeel harkaton se un larkion par kya beet rhi huti hai,woh in zillat amaiz nazron se ghabra kar ghur baith jana chahti hain leken koi na koi majboori unhay bahar ki rah dikhati hai jab hi woh ghur se nikalti hain, Kaaaaaash k log samjh jayen k yeh larki jo ghur se nikli hai is k peechay koi majboori hugi jab hi woh ghur se is waqt bahar hai , kaash k woh larki ka (naqaab main hute hoye) x-ray karne k bajaye us k peechay khari parishani ko daikh lain! kaash k har larki har buri nazron se bach kar apni manzil ko jaye aur kheriyat se, izzat o aabroo se apne ghur wapas aye!Ameen!

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    Assalam o Alaikum,

    valliam - Urdu Writers Competition May 2011

    Maa aik aisi hasti hai ke jiska koi naum badal nahiin ho sakta..
    yeh dhoop mein aik ghani chaho hai..humein har mushkil se bachati hain aise jaise koi parinda apne bachon ko apne paron mein chupa leta hai..maa buht mohabbat se apne jigar goshoun ko purwaan charhati hai maa ke itne ehsaan hain hum per ke chah kar bhi hum nahiin utaar sakte.. har dukh har sukh mein saath dene wali is hasti ki qadar karni chahiye... usey koi takleef na ho uska ka khayaal rakhna chahiye..uski har baat tawajja se sunni chahiye aur jab umar ko pohanch jaye tu unki khidmat mein koi kotaahi nahiin karni chahiye..

    Mujhe personally lagta hai ke maa ka din tu formality hai maa se mohabbat ka izhaar tu shayad hum kisi na kisi surat roz karte hain kiya apko aisa lagta hai?

    apni mamma ki ghar ke kaamo mein help karna unke uthne se pehle woh kaam kar dena jo woh karna chahti hun unki har baat per amna o sadaqna kehna unke haath pair dabana mujhe lagta hai ke mere yeh amal waqt se pehle mujhe jannat mein le ja rahe hon.. mein bata nahiin sakti ke mein kiya feel karti hoon aur meri maa mere liye kia hai meri maa mere liye aik aisa asasa hai ke jo mere liye har cheez se zyada qeemti hai aap sab apni maa ki qaddar karein jo buhut mohabbat karti hai apse us se mohabbat karein jo kabhi bhi apko dukhi nahiin dekhna chahti.. uski khidmat karein ke uske pairon tale jannat hai..

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    Last edited by мιѕнααℓ; 04-05-2011 at 02:02 PM.
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    exclaim Re: Urdu Writers Competition May 2011

    ye upar sis ny jo bat ki pardy ki is mushry ko is izat dare larki ko ak lrki hi ny kharab kea hy naqab posh larki 2 trah se hy ak wo jis ny khuda aehkmat ko made nazar rkhty hwy parda kea or dosri wo jo dehshat gardi main naqab main hy
    koi kisi ko kese jnta hy aese hi ak lrki naqab main ak police waly ko dehshat gardi ky hatho khult ki mot mrwya but wo hamari nazar mn shaheed hy lekin is naqab mn us ny logo ka itmad tora

    agr ye post achi na lagy to dlt kr dena
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    sab se pehle tu yahan tehreer karni hai us par tazkara o tabsara nahi , doosri baat yeh k discussion section nahi hai yeh........ teesray yeh k aap ki baat aik had tak theek hai , leken aisay tu naqaab main call girls bhi huti hain , tu kya in ki waja se hum parda karna chor dain? aur aap ki doosri baat ka bhi jawab hazir hai k jo roz marra ki nikalany wali khawateen hutin hain , tu kya area k log nhi jantay k in ka talluq hamare area se hai ya yeh roz is rastay se guzarti hai tu kya woh bhi dehshat gard hu gai? sirf 10 , 20% logo ki waja se hum tammam naqab posh khawateen ko tu aik hi Saf main khara nhi kar saktay na?

    Bahar haal baat niklay gi tu door tak jaye gi , main ne apni tehreer main sirf aik pehlo ko mad-e-nazar rakha tha , aur usi ko topic banaya, kyon k yahan aik choti si tehreer daini hai koi Afsana nahi!

    aur kam az kam mujhe tu koi baat buri nhi lgi k dlt ki jaye post! leken plzzzzz agar mazeed baat karni hai tu is k leye Gupshup section hazir hai!, wahan behes o mubahisa kya jaye tu zaida behtar hai !

    2dnmmf - Urdu Writers Competition May 2011

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    2q39fuw - Urdu Writers Competition May 2011

    greeb bacha bhook se bilbila raha hai bewa maa rote howe ansoon ponch ker lakrion pr pani rakh k kah rahi hai k beta khana pak raha hai thorda sa saber krle mere laal abi ban jaiga ab banega tab banega mager kab banega ye us maa k rote howe ansso se pocha kabhi kisi ne k wo bhook si bilbilatey abchon k liye apna khoon tak baich ker do waqat ki roti lati serkon per bhaagtey daortey bheek magtey howe sukhi fenki howi roti ko utha ker khushi se khaney waley en gareebon ki zindagi per ek nazer hi daal ker dekhon aur b dard naak gham zada log hai jiska samna ye greeb roozana kertey hai kabhi kabhi us maa k bas main ho tu apne khoon ka qatra qatra bech dey per bebas un k liye hi apni saansey bacha ker rakhti hai kiyn ye sab daolat mandon aur ameeron ko nahi dikhta...?

    zara sochyiye kaisa manzer honga ye jab ek gareeb maa ko uske bachon se jhoot kehna parta hai take k bhook se bilbiltey bachey us se dekhe nahi jatey aur ayesa kah kah k saarey bachon ko badi mushkil se bhooka hi sula deti hai us per kaya beetti hongi . kari dhoop main paglon k jaisa bhagte howe serkon per koi bheek mang raha hai tu koi unhi bhook se tarp ker sarkon per bimaar mar jata hai aur use sabhi nazer andaz ker detey hai kiyn wo insaan nahi hai ?...

    be roozgari aur gareebi ek ayesa marz hai jiski koi dawa nahi ayesa gahm hai jiska samna roozana kerna parta hai aur hamesha kaya ehsaas nahi en onchi emaarton k daolat mandon ko enka zameer kaha hai...?
    ye apna shokh pora kerne disco ja saktey hai movie aur race aur tafree picnik shopping wagayera k liye hazaaron gawa saktey hai lekin ek bhokey bachey ko khana nahi khila saktey ek gareeb ki zindagi sawar jai uska addminition kisi b school main karana unke bas ka kaam nahi arey ye tu chordo ye apna bacha howa khana fenk saktey hai lekin kisi gareeb ko dena unhe charwa dena samjhtey hai ayese ameeron k beech main ye greeb bacha rooz bhooka sota yaha chawal ki patli boji se apna pait bherta ye bewa aurat ghar gahr bhatakti kaam k liye tu us se sao sawaal kerke kuch kaam detey tu hai ye ameer per bahana kerke bina paisey diye nikaal detey hai tu wo greeb apna khoon bech ker do roti lati hai es bchey se bhook berdasht na hoti tu wo akser onchi buidling k qareeb fenki howe kachrey ki cheezon main roti dhondta hai aur use mil bhi jata hai khana aur wo choop ker apni maa se chopa k khaa leta tak use dukh na ho k aaj pait ki aag ne use es qader majboor kerdiya hai ... na uska koi future hai na use gareebi ne koi haq diya aur na hi en ameeron k dil main unhey dekh ker dard hota hai maaashrey ki deemk kahaa jata hai enhe ye apne ayesh wo araam aur apne fazpoul shoukh main sab kuch ker saktey hai lekin enki tarf ek hamdardi ki nazer hi utha ker dekhey koi tu janey enhey do roti k liye kitni mushkilaat ka samna kerna parta hai koi hai jo enki tarf ek nazer raehm ki dikhai ya enki bhook ko samjhey...?

    deen aur eslaami baatein kerney waley molvi masjid k naam se laakhon ruppey ka chanda jama ker lete hai jo kaya unhey nahi pata k ALLAH tu her masoom bachey main basta hai enke liye kuch akrey...
    ya fir unhe koi asra kiyn nahi deta?

    yateem bewaaon aur gareebon per jo rahem nahi kertey wo kaise musalmaan hai kisi mazloom ki madad kerna bhi insaniyar hai fakeeron aur garebon ki madad ka kaha hai fir kiyn ham unhe nazer andaaz kertey hai....?
    Aye daolat walon kabhi bhook se bilag ker roti howi anhon se roti dhoondtey howe bachon ki tarf b dekhon
    jo zaya khana aap fenk sakte hon usi se kam az akm kisi gareeb ko khila ker b dekhon tu kitna sukoon milta hai be roozgari k azaab se guzer k kabhi dekha hai ...?
    kabhi dil per pather rakhen wali ayesi maaon se milker dekha hai? jisene apne bachon ko bhooka sulaya hai...

    ALLAH ki nayaamtein tu bhut hongi aapke paas lekin gareebon ko dene wala dil nahi ek gareeb ager roz derwazey per ajaiga tu yehi kahonge k esne bheek mangne ki adat paal li hai rooz ajata hai aaj ese bhaga don kiyn aapko rooz bhook nahi lagti ...?

    wo gareeb fir kaha jaiga jis ghar se aas baandi thi usne b bhaga diya tu...? bade afsoos aur dukh ki baat hai ayese greeb hazaaron milegey mager ek dildaar nahi milega jo unke liye kuch kerkye take wo kabhi bheek na mangey kuch disco aur sharaab ya fazoul shoukh ka paisa naik kaam main laga ker dekhe tu kaya honga...?
    baat samjhney ki mehssos kerne ki hai ALLAH unki madad kare aur ham sabke k dilon main unke liye rahem ata karey ...Ameen

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    Aksar main sochte hoon k hum se galati kahan hote hai ? woh galati jo kabhi kabhi gunah bhi ban jati hai. tab .. jab hum kuch karnay ka irada dil main kar rahay hoon aur humaray ander kuch Khatka sa ho k ...nahi yeh galat hai! aur hum is Khatkay ko yeh keh kar nazar andaaz kar dain k "hum konsa humaisha aisa kartay hain bas aik baar karnay se kuch nahi hota" aur pher us khatkhy ko nazardandaaz kar k woh kaam kar lain lakin yeh Aik baar .....bas pher aik baar nahi rehta baar baar honay lagta hai itna k hum pher is k aadi ho jatay hain ...pher wo galat kaam bhi humain galat nahi lagta kun k kisi bhi kaam ki hesitation bhi bas pehly baar ki hote hai aur jab woh hesitation khatam ho jai to galat aur sahee ka farq bhi khatam ho jata hai. Asal main us ahsaas ko jo aik khatak ki surat humaray dil main hota hai use nazar andaaz karna he humari galati hote hai jo gunah main badal jati hai.bas woh khataka aik alarm ki tarah he hota hai jo humain baaz rakhnay ki koshish karta hai us waqt do batain hote hain ya to hum apnay nafs ko control kar k apnay aap ko us kaam se rook laite hain ya pher khud apnay nafs k control main chalay jatay hain jo humain tabahi ki taraf lay jata hai. Nafs bhi bilkul aik bayjan lakri ki lathi jaisa hota hai jab tak humaray hath main rahay to bayjan lathi hota hai aur agar humaray hath se nikal jai to Azdaha ban k sab kuch nigal laita hai.
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