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    snow ~*Dedicated To.....*~

    Asalam o alikum

    friends....

    sub ki poetry parh kar mujhay bhi shoq hua kay may bhi poetry likhon

    lakin is kay baad may nay sabaq hasil kar liya hay kay ya meray bus ki baat nahi hay
    bara mushkil hay poetry karna


    apni zindagi ki pehali or akhri poetry may dedicated kar rahi hon

    SD ko OR meri sweet si friend
    Saniya ko

    1=

    Jub
    kabhi taiz hawa
    Chalti hay
    To...!
    Aik Ahesas hota hay
    Ka tu meray pass hota hay...



    2=

    Aay zindagi aik teray liye
    Hum nay kai bar apni jan hari hay


    3=

    Khawabon ki duniya may rakh na khud ko
    Khawabon ka bharam reh jaye to acha hay
    Zindagi kay rung or bhi hain jo daikho to
    Tamam umar kay malal say acha hay




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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    walaikum Asalam

    ye u ne likhi thi

    gud yar bht acchi likhi hai

    nd last q u likhti raho sach
    n thank u so much dedicate karne k liye


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    kon kehta hai u nahi likh sakti
    bht achi likhi hai, such mein
    pehli koshish he achi hai
    qafiya, radeef ke sath
    meri pehli tou bad-ter thi

    u plz likhti raho
    bht acha likh sakti ho
    second shair mujh bht acha laga

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    yahi suprise tha u kay liye

    nahi meray bus ki baat nahi hay ya
    thank u




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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    hai na Hijaab siso

    ab to likho gi na bachu:ee:
    waqi mein 2nd nd 1st khoobsurat the balke hain
    Last edited by SenoriTa; 04-05-2011 at 06:31 PM.


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by Hijaab View Post

    kon kehta hai u nahi likh sakti
    bht achi likhi hai, such mein
    pehli koshish he achi hai
    qafiya, radeef ke sath
    meri pehli tou bad-ter thi

    u plz likhti raho
    bht acha likh sakti ho
    second shair mujh bht acha laga
    thank u sis
    ya qafia radif hi mujhay masla kartay hain
    u ko pasand aye




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by seven tiles View Post
    yahi suprise tha u kay liye

    nahi meray bus ki baat nahi hay ya
    thank u
    bht accha surprize hai
    ik pal ko mughe laga k u in mein kuch sos mein do gi mughe ye nai pata tha k u ne khud hi likh dali
    ur welcome nd thank you


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    haain pheli or akhri wo ku bahi ?
    itna acha tu likha hai
    phir ku ?
    tum likh sakti ho
    jab aik bar tu dosri bar ..
    dekho khud se zaburdasti mat karna...
    bus kisi chez ko dekh ker
    kuch khayal ajaye likhne ka tab likhna
    InSHALLAH likhogi
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    thank u appo
    koshish karon gi INSHALLAH




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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    u ny likha
    waaaaaaaaaaaaah gud hai
    نہ جانے ہم کہاں گم ہو چکے ہیں ....
    جو ممکن ہو -- تو ہم کو ڈهونڈ لاٶ ...

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