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    Default Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    kitni udaas shaam hai ehsaas k angan main..
    kayi gham ki haawein yaha tufaan ban gai...
    dard ki bijlion se dherkanon ki gonje barh gayi
    khizan k sokhey patton ki pheli chader pe...
    shabnam ki bondein bhi tera naam likh gayi
    es khomsh shab ko saliqa nahi aya dil bhelaney ka
    her rukh mian jo dard ka naqsh bankr gard gayi...
    kitna tang mizaaj mahoul tha khooli haawon k dermiya b
    meri saanson ki qaid main aah bankey rook gayi ...
    maazi ki awaaz b dabi rahi ta mudat labon k dermiya ...
    ye bezubaan khamoshiya bas cheenkhti rah gayi...
    dard tera bataney use kahi waja na mili..
    tu kabi teri yaad ko bholaney use jaga na mili
    kitni udaas shaam hai es wiraan shab ki..
    dard ka angan hai gham hai tanhayi hai...
    es rait k bister per sone teri yaad chali ayi hai
    dobta suraj b ab thak k so gaya ord ker gham ki chader...
    dard k ashna main sadion baad use neend ayi hai..

    My Own....



    Last edited by *resham*; 06-05-2011 at 07:40 AM.

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    sad mgr acha likha
    نہ جانے ہم کہاں گم ہو چکے ہیں ....
    جو ممکن ہو -- تو ہم کو ڈهونڈ لاٶ ...

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    nice.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    accha likha hai siso


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    hmmmm...
    acha likha hay




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    wording achi hai, concept acha hai,
    wazn nahi hy bas...

    overall its nice. keep it up

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    achi likhi ha.. likhti raho.. aur acha likh skti ho...

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    acha hai
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)

    aap sabka bhut bhut shokeriya friendz.....

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    Default Re: Kitni Udaas Shaam Hai (Nazam)



    kitna tang mizaaj mahoul tha khooli haawon k dermiya b
    meri saanson ki qaid main aah bankey rook gayi ...
    maazi ki awaaz b dabi rahi ta mudat labon k dermiya ...
    ye bezubaan khamoshiya bas cheenkhti rah gayi...
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا

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