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    cute Ghazal: Ab kahan dost rahe saath nibhane wale

    Ab kahan rahe dost sath nibhane wale
    Sabne seekhey hai adaab zamane wale.

    Dil jalao ya diye aankon ke derwaze per
    Waqt se pahle to aate nahin aane wale.

    Ashq ban ke main nigahon mai teri aaon
    Aye mujhey apni aankhon se girane wale.

    Waqt badla to uthaate hain ab ungli mujh pe
    Kal talaq hak main mere haath uthane wale.

    Waqt her zakhm ka merham to nahin ban sakta
    Derd kuch hote hain ta-umra rulane wale.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 16-05-2011 at 10:06 AM.

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ab kahan dost rahe saath nibhane wale

    very nice sharing

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ab kahan dost rahe saath nibhane wale

    ek dam sahi kaha gaya hai is shair main...

    Ab kahan rahe dost sath nibhane wale
    Sabne seekhey hai adaab zamane wale...

    aweosme poetry...
    keep sharing...
    Last edited by *resham*; 17-05-2011 at 12:49 AM.

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    cute Re: Ghazal: Ab kahan dost rahe saath nibhane wale

    Quote Originally Posted by *resham* View Post
    ek dam sahi kaha gaya hai is shair main...

    Ab kahan rahe dost sath nibhane wale
    Sabne seekhey hai adaab zamane wale...

    aweosme poetry...
    keep sharing...
    Shukriya Mohterma aapne Ghazal ko
    pahchana aur tavazzo di. Humne socha
    ghazal ke alfaaz bekar hai isliye ise
    nazer andaz ker diya gaya hai. Per
    aapki daad se honsla afjayi hui. Waise
    kahte hai na ki heere ki parakh johri
    he kerta hai. Shukriya.

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ab kahan dost rahe saath nibhane wale

    Quote Originally Posted by akiller View Post
    very nice sharing
    Shukriya Miyan aapke daad ki
    aur honsla afjaye ki. So nice.

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ab kahan dost rahe saath nibhane wale

    nice

    Sajdoo mein guzar doon apni saari Zindagi..

    Bas ik bar wo keh dein Mughe duaon se Maang lo..!!

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