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    asking my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttttt


    jab bicharna tay hua tu judayun ka malal krain bhi tu kya

    Muhabbat hee na rahi darmyan tu faslon ka dar he kya


    anxiously waiting for ur comments guys............
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    Default Re: my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttt

    Assalam o Alaikum

    buhut achi koshish hai..
    Alhamdullilah

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    Re: my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttt

    jb bicharna tay hay tu judayun ka malal krain bhi tu kya
    muhabbat hee na rahi darmyan tu faslon ka dar he kya

    (actually im checking edit option..cldnt find option of delete..y?)
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    Default Re: my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttt

    haan jee yeh second sahi hia..
    achi koshish hia.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttt

    thnx naaz

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    Default Re: my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttt

    gooooddd accha likha hai....

    likhti rahein siso


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    aww thank u sanorita..koshish hu gi aur bahtar hu sakay

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    very nice...keep writing
    if u ♥ cooking then check Dis OuT

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    thnx cute parsa..so nice of u

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    Default Re: my first own shair ever..plzzzzzzzzz commenttt

    v good zahra sis
    keep writng and shring wth us

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