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    Default Urdu Writers Competition October 11



    Is Bar App ko is topic ke bare main apne khayalat ka izhar karna hia.

    Shadi Shuda Zindagi main Maa or Shareek-e-Hayat k Darmiyan
    Muamlon main Balance Kaise Kiya jaye?



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    1 ... Aik member aik he bar Share Karsakta hai.
    2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.
    3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 Oct hai.
    4 ... Please be advised that there will be no poll for deciding the competition winner. From now on Admin Jury will decide who the winner for each competition is.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    larkon na btana ha


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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    Mere Khayal Se Yeh Sirf Mard ki Infiradi Koshish se na huga, is k leye Maan, aur B.v ka husn-e-kirdar zaroori hai , Maan agar yeh Samjh lay k Meri Muhabbat Taqseem nhi hoi hai bal k Muhabbat ko Zarab day dya gaya hai tu mamlay boht achi tarhan se sulajh sakte hain,

    Jab K Bive ko bhi yeh baat Zehen Nasheen kar laini chahye k mera Shohor sirf Mera hi nhi bal k is par Maan Behno ka bhi haq hai , main us ki zindagi main ab shamil hoi hon jab k Maan Behnay pehlay se hain aur Mujhe yeh Sab Aala Zarfi se bardasht karna chaheye, aur Hasad ya Shirakat k jazba apne andar paida na hunay day tu bhi zindagi ki gaari sukoon se rawan dawan hu sakti hai

    Jab k Mard ka kirdar tu hai hi Markazi kirdar , usay apni Maan ki waisi hi khidmat karni chaye, usay waqt ko theek tarhan se set karna huga, ofc, ghur ,maan , bv , sab k jazbaat ka khayal rakhna huga, asal Imtihaan hi Mard ka hai , aur sab se ahaim baat yeh hai k woh apni b.v aur maan par yeh bat ayan kar day k main kisi ki koi shiakayt na suno ga, kyon k orton mein "Kaan bharnay" ki salahiyat mujood huti hai , leken Mard ko Apni "Aankhain" aur Kaan bhi khulay rakhnay honge,
    nuqsan wahi huga jahan palra zaida bhari huga, maan par saari inayatay hon aur bv k leye kuch na hu tu yeh bhi galat hai ,bv k leye sab kuch hu aur maan ka khayal na hu tu yeh bhi galat, Insaaf ka daman hath se na janay day tu behtreen misali ghur ban sakta hai aur kisi ko kisi se shikayat bhi na hugi!

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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    ٰMeri Tarf se Is Dafa Sorry!!
    bcoz Topic he kuch aisa hai....kuch nai likha sakta
    Mere Pass Dono he Rishtay Nai hain....
    Or Na he kisi k baray Main janta hoon,,,,,,k un ki life k bare main likh sakoon....



    sagar3 - Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    جانےکیسا رشتہ ہےمیرا اسکیذاتکےساتھ
    وہذرا بھیخاموشہوتوسانس ٹھہرسی جاتی ہے




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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    Rishton Ki Zanjeerein !!!



    3no ki mushtariqa koshish hi rishto ko kamiyaab bana sakti hai..!!
    har rishte ki apni ahmiyat hoti hai aur usey uski woh ahmiyat jiska woh rishta haqdaar hai insaaf ke sath dena chahiye..

    shadi shudah zindagi ko balance rakhne ke liye zarori hai shoahar/beta Gair janibdaari se kaam ley..halaat ka bagor mutalaa karey aur phr koi faisla karey,agar biwi galti karey tu usey us per tokey aur agar maa se galti ho tu usey saaf goyi se baat clear karey aur apna moqaf rakhe..
    yeh rishte buhut nazuk hote hain..unhein sirf tok dene se bhi kaam nhi chalta thora sa ghussa aur thora sa pyaar izzat o ehtraam beherhaal maani rakhta hai.. magar itna bhi na ho ke jis ko ap itna de rahe hain woh uska najaiz faida uthaye..

    zulm o zaati ka mahoul khatam karna hai tu shoahar.beta ko buhut hi insaaf se kaam lena hoga..usey koshish karni chahiyemaa aur biwi dono apas mein mil jul kar rahein.. yeh tu aik bete ka farz hai jo din raat mehnat karne ke baada bhi in mamlaat ko handle kare..

    lekin aik biwi/bahu ki zimeydariyaan kiya hai..?jo aurat apke ghar bahu ban kar ati hai us ke dil mein do tarhan ke khudshaat hote hain? sasural walon ka uske saath rawaiyaa kiya hoga? aur yeh ke shohar maa ke kehne mein akar us ke saath zyadti na kare..

    usey yeh samjhaya jata hai ke saas sirf saas hoti hai maa kbhi nahiin ban sakti tu awal din se aik sard si deewar tan jati hai..jab ke dar haqeeqat ais akarne ke bajaye agar soch bojh se kaam liya jaye tu masail paida hi na hon..aik bahu hone ke nate usey cahhiye saas ko shikayat ka moqa na de na miaan ko pareshaan kare saas kuch kehti bhi hain tu aik kaan se sune dusre se nikaal de...yahan yeh baat bhi qabil e zikr hai ke shohar aur saas ki mukhtalif iqsaam hoti hain.kuch had se yada badmizaaj ya jhagralo sazishi aur kuch had se zyada masoom aur kuch mein dono baatein hoti hain..jinhein samajhne ke liye arsa darkaar hota hai.. biwi/bahu ko chahiye tahamull se kaam ley unke mizaaj ko samne rakh kar woh koi kaam karey gi tu yeh uske ane wale kal ke liye behtreen sabit hoga..shoara aur saas ki pasand /napasand. ka khayaal rakhna bahu/ biwi ka farz hai..aurat darasal qurbani o aisaar ka naam hai..usey har qadam apni khuahishaat ka gala ghutna parta haI tab hi jakar woh shohar aur saas ke nazar mein apna muqaam bana sakti hai..lekin is ka yeh matlab nhi ke woh na insaafi hoti dekhe aur phir bhi apni ankhein band rakhe?? nahiin usey apni baat nihayat ehsan tareeqe se saas aur mian tak pohanchani chahiye.. ke

    "ammi jaan apki raye sar ankhon per magar is tarhaan kiya aur is tarhan hua tu?"

    aur mian se bhi is tarhan kahe ke uske bharakne ka ya kisi fasaad ka imkaamn na ho

    "ap behter samajh sakte hain,apko ikhtyaar hai,mgr aisa kiya aur aisa ho gaya ya aisa karne se aisa hojata hai,baqi ap behter jante honge"

    woh log apki baat ko zaror sochein ge samjhein ge na bhi samjhe tu bhi waqt sab samjha deta hai aur jab unhey lage ga ke aap sahi hain tu apki qadar barhe gi.. ..aik achi aur khushgawaar zindagi ka raaz yehi hai ke aik bahu apni saas se banaye rakhe aur aik biwi apne shohar ki raye ko ehem jane saath saath apni baat un tak buhut hi samajh daari se goshguzaar kare..

    ab baari ati hai saas ki,jo sab se pehle aik maa hoti hai uske bhi bete ki shaadi ke waqt 10 khudshaat hote hain jinko hawa dene mein media ka sab se bara haath hai..

    "bahu betey ko le kar alag na hojaye usey daba kar rakho !"
    "beta bahu ke kehne mein akar maa ke hukum ki nafi na kar de "

    "kitchen se aur ghar se meri rajdhani aur izzat na khatam ho jaye !"

    usey maa se saas balke yeh kehna chahiye zalim saas banane mein apna kirdaar ada karte hain aur yahiin akar woh apni aney wlai bahu ko beti samjhne ke bajaye apna raqeeb samjhne lagti hai aur uske khilaaf muhaz arayi ka aghaz kar deti hain..

    jab ke mera khayaal hai unhein us se zyada yeh khayaal karna chahiye ke is se betey ki shadi shudah zindagi muttasir tu nhi hogi? rishte koi khel ya mzaq tu hote nhi.. saas ko chahiye bajye is tarhan bahu se bair badhne ke bajaye usey woh pyaar izzat aur mmohabbat dein jis ki woh haqdaar hai appke husn e sulook se muttasir ho ker woh apki khud garweedah ho jaye gi ..betey ke muqable mein bahu ko ehmiyat dein..uske liye apne hath s ekuch banaye uski dil joyi karein.. bahu ko bilkul wese hi treat karein jese apni beti ko karti hain.. pehle pehal usey pyaar se apna garweedah bana lein phir apne haq ka istemaal karein bahu agar koiyi galti karti hain tu usey istarhan samjhaye ke uski dil azaari na ho aur usey yeh bhi jitlaye ke woh unke liye bahu nahiin beti hai aur woh us ki maa hone ke nate uske liye acha hi soch rahhi hun..misaal ke tor per:

    "maa hun tumhari behter faisla kar sakti hun"

    dekho beta tumhari ammi bhi hotein tu yehi karti tum tu buhut samajhdara beti ho meri"

    aur jab bahu yeh sab dekhe gi tu na woh shohar ko pareshaan karey gi na saas ko apni azdiwaji zindagi ke saath saath ghareelo amoor mein bhi dilchaspi le gi aur saas ko bhi ehmiyat degi.. hanste baste ghar ki khuahish har larki ko hoti hain..aur jab usey maan aur pyaar miley tu woh kyun ghar ka pyara bhara mahoul kharaab karna achhegi..

    garz 3no agar apni apni zimeydaarion ,aik dusre ki ahmiyat rishton ke nazuk bandhan ko samjhe tu zindagi bilashuba haseen ban jaati hai.. rishton ka yeh gehwara yaqeenan kahin kahiin hi milta hoga aj kal.. magar jo bhi dunia ko zarorat hai aisi be lous mohabbaton aur rishton ki mazbooti o taqat ki.. kyunke yeh rishton ki zanjerein hi hain jo insaan ko aik dafa apne saath baandh lein tu woh umar bhar unse jura rehta hai buhut pyar se... !!
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    yeh usi waqat ho sakta hai jab ap BV ko BV aur maa ko Maa samjhy............ un dono ko un ky hisy ka pyar ,,, waqat,,, aur unki zororiyaat ko pora kery....... kis bhi masly pe gair janibdaarana faisla na kery.............
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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    kaya ye threer mazahiya hosakti hai ya nahi....?

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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    Quote Originally Posted by *resham* View Post
    kaya ye threer mazahiya hosakti hai ya nahi....?
    tumhein lagta hai yeh topic mazahiya ho sakta hai?
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: Urdu Writers Competition October 11

    kiuyn ni ab sirousle ka mujhey etna kuch ni pata...
    per ha saas baho ki kitpit aur husband ka afsoos aur rona bhut sona hai....
    ese mazahiya banaya ja sakta hai sirouse jo kuch kehana tha logon se suna sunaya
    ap log kah chukey na....
    ab es se zayeda main kaha kah sakti hon...
    es dafa topic hi ayesa hai hunh.....

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