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    Default ankahii BateiN..!!

    Aksar kuch bateiN hai Jo Ankhai reh jati hai
    k apni Baat Ganwana Mujhe Manzoor nhiin..!!
    Last edited by мιѕнααℓ; 18-12-2011 at 01:32 PM.
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    Default Re: ankahii BateiN..!!

    hmmm,,
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: ankahii BateiN..!!

    khiyal acha hai
    but shair sahi nahi bana

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    Default Re: ankahii BateiN..!!

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    hmmm,,
    Quote Originally Posted by Hijaab View Post
    khiyal acha hai
    but shair sahi nahi bana
    thanx both
    ab theek hai?
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    Default Re: ankahii BateiN..!!

    pehlay wala to mein keh sakti thi ke theek nahi hai
    lekin as myself, i don't know much about poetry rules, to yeh nahi keh sakti ke theek hai
    but pehlay walay se better hai

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hijaab View Post
    pehlay wala to mein keh sakti thi ke theek nahi hai
    lekin as myself, i don't know much about poetry rules, to yeh nahi keh sakti ke theek hai
    but pehlay walay se better hai
    hmm,
    acha baji shukriya..
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: ankahii BateiN..!!

    wahh accha hai


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by SenoriTa View Post
    wahh accha hai
    olivia shukria..
    Alhamdullilah

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    Default Re: ankahii BateiN..!!

    good hay...




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!


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