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    candel Ghazal: Ye neembaaz teri ankriyon ke maikhane




    Ye neembaz teri ankriyon ke maikhane
    Nazer mile to chalak jaaye dil ke paimane.

    Kahin kali ne tabassum ka raaz samjha hai
    Wo khud chaman hai apni bahaar kya jane.

    Ajab nahin muhabbat jo mujhe samajh na sake
    Wo ajnaabi hoon jise jeest na pachaane.

    Kahin chiraag jalane ki ho rahi hai sabeel
    Bujha rahe hain yahaan shama khud he pervaan
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ye neembaaz teri ankriyon ke maikhane

    nice..
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ye neembaaz teri ankriyon ke maikhane

    Shukriya Naz aapne
    gaur phermaya Ghazal pe.

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ye neembaaz teri ankriyon ke maikhane

    bohat khoobsurat ghazal.....

    Thanks for sharing ....

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