Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Jodhpur . India
    Age
    76
    Posts
    6,218
    Mentioned
    3 Post(s)
    Tagged
    23 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    10
    Rep Power
    21474851

    candel Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

    Khuli jo aankh tou woh tha na woh zamana tha
    Dahekti aag the tanhaayi the fasana tha.

    Gamon ne baant liya hai mujhe yuon aapes mai
    Kay jaise main koi loota hua khazana tha.

    Yeh kya ki chund he qadmon main thak ke
    baith gaye,
    Tumeh to saath mera door tak nibhana tha.

    Mujhe jo merey lahoo mein dubo ke guzra hai
    Woh koi gair nahin yaar ek purana tha.

    Khud apne he haath se us ko kaat diya
    Ki jis darkhat ki tahni pe aashiyana tha.

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Dec 2010
    Location
    Lahore
    Age
    29
    Posts
    2,089
    Mentioned
    3 Post(s)
    Tagged
    1163 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    0
    Rep Power
    21474846

    Default Re: Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

    nice one good
    The KING Is BACK...

  3. #3
    Join Date
    Jun 2011
    Location
    rawalpindi
    Age
    33
    Posts
    1,273
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    10 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    0
    Rep Power
    429505

    Default Re: Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

    Gamon ne baant liya hai mujhe yuon aapes mai
    Kay jaise main koi loota hua khazana tha.

    bohat khoob intikhab...

    sigpic13827 8 - Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Jodhpur . India
    Age
    76
    Posts
    6,218
    Mentioned
    3 Post(s)
    Tagged
    23 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    10
    Rep Power
    21474851

    Default Re: Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

    Shukriya King and Azeem Saheb.
    Aapne ghazal ko tavajjo di aur
    tahe dil se dad ata ki. Lagta hai
    Sher o Shayri ki achhi pahchaan hai
    aur tajurba bhi kaabile tareef hai.
    so Nice

  5. #5
    *jamshed*'s Avatar
    *jamshed* is offline کچھ یادیں ،کچھ باتیں
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Location
    every heart
    Posts
    14,586
    Mentioned
    138 Post(s)
    Tagged
    8346 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    4
    Rep Power
    21474858

    Default Re: Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

    flowers02 - Ghazal: Khuli jo aankh tou woh thaa na zamana tha

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •