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    Default Own Bait Bazi

    HI Guyz mein yahan per apni poetry say apnay likhay huway ash'aar ki bait bazi shuru kar raha hoon ,,
    Umeed hy k sub ko pasand aye gi ,, or sub is mein apnay zati shair post karein gay jis word pay shair khtam hoga usky last lafz sy shuru karien gay shair ko,,,


    Nahi hay koi bhi meri dua siwa is kay,,
    Merey Rub Humna ka Daman hara bhara rakhna,,

    next word is " Alif "

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    Default Re: Own Bait Bazi

    in Labon Per Ab koi Aah Hai Na Faryaad
    In Labon Ne Ab Chup rehna Sekh Liya Hai.


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    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Own Bait Bazi

    Yeh Jo Khushiyan He Khushiyan Hai Meray Gird
    Yeh Bas Us K Payar Ki Nawazshain Hain.....


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    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Own Bait Bazi

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    cute Re: Own Bait Bazi

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    next iz " alif "

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    Default Re: Own Bait Bazi

    ^^usay apni zid ki fikar thi^^
    mujhay apni anna ka kahyal tha
    na mil sakay hum phir kabhi
    woh humrai mohabbto ka zawal tha
    Last edited by anjana; 15-10-2008 at 11:32 PM. Reason: next word iz AALIF
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    Default Re: Own Bait Bazi

    insaniyat kay, wafa kay paikar hotay hein woh log
    woh log jo zakham kha ker bhi dua detey hein

    abhi abhi banaya hai, shair kam aur sentence ziada hai

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    cute Re: Own Bait Bazi

    nahi hoon ub talak mayoos mein ay jan-e-wafa
    Dua mein aisi karun ga k hila doon ga Arsh


    Next is "Sheen"

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    Default Re: Own Bait Bazi

    Sham hai udas or saans b hai ruki si
    jo ho sakay Jana tu tum lout auo.....
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Own Bait Bazi

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    Woh jo kehti thi k mein hooN sab se alag
    ab us k honton pe bhi mera naam nahi raha
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    Umeed-e-Hoor ny Sab Kuch Sikha Rkha Hai Waeiz Ko
    Ye Hazrat Dekhne Main Seedhe Saadhe Bhole Bhale Hain
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