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    snow Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Assalam-o_Alikum WR WB

    Mai apnay tamaam un Techers ka shuker guzar hoon jinhoo nay mujhy Urdu Sikhai aur mujhy Poetry likhnay mai madaad karty hay , Specially to Mughal , Ali , Asif n Atif Bhai .

    FeamnAllah

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    walaikum salam

    MashAllah ap tu bhot achi poetry karne lage hain or Urdu bhi intehaye saaf hogaye hai phele se kahe zaida

    v v nice
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    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    bohat acha likha hai
    kaassshhhh meri urdu b saaf ho jaye poetry k liye mujhe samjh nahi ata words kya use karun to bas simple hi use ker leti hun

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    walaikum salam

    MashAllah ap tu bhot achi poetry karne lage hain or Urdu bhi intehaye saaf hogaye hai phele se kahe zaida

    v v nice

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Ji naz ab to bhot bahter bolnay laga hoon

    shukriya pasnd karnay ka

    FeamnAllah

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Quote Originally Posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
    bohat acha likha hai
    kaassshhhh meri urdu b saaf ho jaye poetry k liye mujhe samjh nahi ata words kya use karun to bas simple hi use ker leti hun
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Honestly mai batow ... mujhy Urdu wo pasnd hay jo aam shaks k bhi samjh aajay , mai is cheez k to khilaf hoon k Mushkil Urdu words ho aur aap ki baat aaam shask na samjh sakay to us ka koi fayda nahi

    MashaAllah abhi aap ki mai nay aik Ghazal parhi hy nehyat hi narum aur khubsuart lagi hay ahsaso sy bahri hui

    FeamnALlah

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainMidnight View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Honestly mai batow ... mujhy Urdu wo pasnd hay jo aam shaks k bhi samjh aajay , mai is cheez k to khilaf hoon k Mushkil Urdu words ho aur aap ki baat aaam shask na samjh sakay to us ka koi fayda nahi

    MashaAllah abhi aap ki mai nay aik Ghazal parhi hy nehyat hi narum aur khubsuart lagi hay ahsaso sy bahri hui

    FeamnALlah
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    ahaan theek hai phr jaise likhti hun waise hi likhun gi
    aur jo meri wo wali ghazal hia us mein ik ik word meri lyf ka hia bohat true hai

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Hmmmmm bohat khoob CM

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainMidnight View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Ji naz ab to bhot bahter bolnay laga hoon

    shukriya pasnd karnay ka

    FeamnAllah



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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    buhat khoob ji..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

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    Default Re: Nazum Descember Ki Bheegti Shaam

    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Scream View Post
    Hmmmmm bohat khoob CM

    Assalam-o-alikum WR WB

    Shukriya

    FeamnAllah

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