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    Default Khudaraa bakhsh do ab to,taza nazam

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    kesey mizaaj haiN dosto,umeed hai bakheir honge,
    aaj bahot dinoN baad masrufiyat ney kuchh mohlat di to socha aap se aek taza nazam share kar li jaaye,umeed hai pasand aaye gi,
    aap ki aara ka yaqeenan intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Zain.



    nazamkhudarabakhshdo - Khudaraa bakhsh do ab to,taza nazam
    Last edited by ishtiaq zain; 24-10-2008 at 08:40 PM.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Khudaraa bakhsh do ab to,taza nazam

    wsalam
    sukur hia janab nazar aye eid ke chand ke bad ...

    is nazam se ap ka style kuch change lag raha hia ...najane mjhe ku laga..or acha hia waise style se hat ker likha jaye tu or maza ata hai..aik khoubsurat nazam.aik urse bad share karne ka behad sukriya

    ate rehey ga
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    buhat sach or acha likha hai ap nay zain sb

    likhtay rahien or share kertay rahien hamare saath..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

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    53339010150654137193873 - Khudaraa bakhsh do ab to,taza nazam

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*zaib*~ View Post
    bahot shukriya,:rose
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    wsalam
    sukur hia janab nazar aye eid ke chand ke bad ...

    is nazam se ap ka style kuch change lag raha hia ...najane mjhe ku laga..or acha hia waise style se hat ker likha jaye tu or maza ata hai..aik khoubsurat nazam.aik urse bad share karne ka behad sukriya

    ate rehey ga
    nazam ki pasandeedagi ke liye be had shukriya Naz,:rose
    ummm style to shaaid wohi hai,bas maozoo badla hai,shaaid issi liye aap ko is maiN badlao mehsoos huwa,
    yaar kaya kiya jaaye,akeli jaan hai,aor dukh hazaaroN,:hehe
    aek to wesey hi yahaaN ki zindagi bahot masroof hai,us par chand aek kaam aesey shuru kar liye ke unhi maiN ulajh ke reh gaya,bas dua karo ke bakhoobi anjaam tak pohanch jaayaiN,wesey ab INSHA ALLAH koshish rahey gi ke kuchh na kuchh time yahaaN bhi de sakooN,
    nazam ki pasandeedagi ke liye aek baar phir bahot shukriya,:rose
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    buhat sach or acha likha hai ap nay zain sb

    likhtay rahien or share kertay rahien hamare saath..
    be had khushi huyi Dua saahiba ke nazam aap ke mayaar pe poori utri,aor be had mamnoon hooN ke aap ne is par apni pasdeedagi ka izhaar kiya,aor hosala afza alfaaz se nawaaza,bahot shukriya,:rose
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Khudaraa bakhsh do ab to,taza nazam

    Walekam-Aslam
    ALLAH ka shukar hai hum tou kheriyat say hein. Aap sunayein Ustad-e-Muhtram, aap ki tabiyat kaise hai. Waisay aap baray kamal kay Ustad hein, sabaq shuro ker kay aisay ghayab huey kay bas, phir koi khabar he nahi hai. Hum samjhay aap hum students ki nalaiqi ki wajh say bhag gayyen hein, kia kehtey hein? Lekin, such baat hai, hum tou apni pori try maar rahey thay parnay ki, ab Ustad Sahab khud he class say ghayab ho jayen tou hum kia karein?
    Khair, ab aur kia kaha ja'ay

    Ab kuch nazam kay baray mein tou janab hamesha ki taran bohat khoob likha hia aap nay. Aam shyri say hath ker mulki halaat per aap kay khiylaat bohat suchay aur karwein hein. ALLAH (SWT) hamaray mulk ko apni hifzo-amaan mein rakhay. AMEEN.
    Aap nay bohat he sucha likha hai, aur bohat he rawani hai nazam mein.

    Keep sharing your great poetry with us
    Be Happy

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    Default Re: Khudaraa bakhsh do ab to,taza nazam

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Walekam-Aslam
    ALLAH ka shukar hai hum tou kheriyat say hein. Aap sunayein Ustad-e-Muhtram, aap ki tabiyat kaise hai. Waisay aap baray kamal kay Ustad hein, sabaq shuro ker kay aisay ghayab huey kay bas, phir koi khabar he nahi hai. Hum samjhay aap hum students ki nalaiqi ki wajh say bhag gayyen hein, kia kehtey hein? Lekin, such baat hai, hum tou apni pori try maar rahey thay parnay ki, ab Ustad Sahab khud he class say ghayab ho jayen tou hum kia karein?
    Khair, ab aur kia kaha ja'ay

    Ab kuch nazam kay baray mein tou janab hamesha ki taran bohat khoob likha hia aap nay. Aam shyri say hath ker mulki halaat per aap kay khiylaat bohat suchay aur karwein hein. ALLAH (SWT) hamaray mulk ko apni hifzo-amaan mein rakhay. AMEEN.
    Aap nay bohat he sucha likha hai, aur bohat he rawani hai nazam mein.

    Keep sharing your great poetry with us
    Be Happy

    bahot khushi huyi jaan kar ke aap kheiriyat se haiN,ALLAH ham sab ko apni amaan maiN rakhey,Aameen,
    maiN bhi ALLAH ke karm se kaafi behtar hooN ab,shukriya.
    jab aap jesey nalaaiq shaagird mil jaayeiN to ustaadoN ko bhaagana hi paRta hai,
    wesey yeh ustaad hai kon?kam az kam maiN to ustaad naheeN hooN,........albata agar baat merey hi ghaaib honey ki hai to arz hai ke kuchh to tabiyat ki nasaazi,aor kuchh kuchh masrufiyaat ne daaman thaamey rakha,site ka chakar to kabhi kabhaar lagata raha,lekin kuchh post karney ka moqa na mila,aor jab moqa mila to haazir ho gaya,
    nazam ki pasandeedagi,aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
    koshish karoon ga ke aata rahooN,aap bhi paRhti rahiye ga,aap ki aara ka intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    bahot khushi huyi jaan kar ke aap kheiriyat se haiN,ALLAH ham sab ko apni amaan maiN rakhey,Aameen,
    maiN bhi ALLAH ke karm se kaafi behtar hooN ab,shukriya.
    jab aap jesey nalaaiq shaagird mil jaayeiN to ustaadoN ko bhaagana hi paRta hai,
    wesey yeh ustaad hai kon?kam az kam maiN to ustaad naheeN hooN,........albata agar baat merey hi ghaaib honey ki hai to arz hai ke kuchh to tabiyat ki nasaazi,aor kuchh kuchh masrufiyaat ne daaman thaamey rakha,site ka chakar to kabhi kabhaar lagata raha,lekin kuchh post karney ka moqa na mila,aor jab moqa mila to haazir ho gaya,
    nazam ki pasandeedagi,aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
    koshish karoon ga ke aata rahooN,aap bhi paRhti rahiye ga,aap ki aara ka intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,

    Oh, kia hua tha aap ki tabiyat ko?
    Aur yaqeenan hum aap ko he refer ker rahey thay, Ustad Sahab
    Aap ko online tou dekha hai mein nay kafi baar, lekin aap posts nahi kertay,bay-shak.
    Waisay aap ki aise kia masrofiyat hai kay aap itnay months baad atay hein?????????
    Aap ki poetry tou mujhe bohat pasand hai aur INSHALLAH aap share kartey rahien, hum partey rahein gey
    Take care

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