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    candel Poetry : Untill The Sunset Hour.

    It is very early
    The sky is still grey
    With shadows of the night
    At yet
    I feel as if
    Everything is bathed
    In sunshine.

    Indeed I feel dazzled
    With the brillance
    Of my own joy
    When a little while later
    The sun did break through
    It seems somehow dim
    In comparrison
    With my own emotions
    I am going home today
    There was one particular
    Bright star
    Which seemed
    A little near the earth
    And yet
    How far away
    As far as hopes from my life
    But I'm happy through
    My heart is weary
    I hope my happyness will last
    Untill
    the sunset hour.

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    Default Re: Poetry : Untill The Sunset Hour.

    Superb lines

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    Default Re: Poetry : Untill The Sunset Hour.

    nice



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    suno hworiginal - Poetry : Untill The Sunset Hour.
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    Default Re: Poetry : Untill The Sunset Hour.

    Thanks friends for closely
    reading the Poem and appreciating
    it. So Nice.

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