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    Default Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    lijiye dosto apni aek adad nayi ghazal ke saath phir se aap ka sabr aazmaaney haazir hoon,umeed hai bardaasht karain ge,
    ghazal kesi lagi,bataaiye ga zaroor,aap ki beish qeemat aara ka yaqeenan intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,



    zainjinparindonkeybaal o parnaheenh - Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    dil chah raha hai aik aik shair quote karo ..lajawab zain...jitni tarif karon kam hian or main koi jhot nahi bol rahe serious bhot he umda ghazal likhi hai or aik aik shair hasen hia...

    munzilon ko pane main umar beet jati hia
    raste wafao ke mukhtasir nahi hote


    wah kiya kehne janab maza agaya

    hum bhi kitne nadan the, jaan he na paye
    sath chalne wale sub, humsafar nahi hote

    wah jee wah dil ki baat kahe hai app ne tu
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    dil chah raha hai aik aik shair quote karo ..lajawab zain...jitni tarif karon kam hian or main koi jhot nahi bol rahe serious bhot he umda ghazal likhi hai or aik aik shair hasen hia...

    munzilon ko pane main umar beet jati hia
    raste wafao ke mukhtasir nahi hote


    wah kiya kehne janab maza agaya

    hum bhi kitne nadan the, jaan he na paye
    sath chalne wale sub, humsafar nahi hote

    wah jee wah dil ki baat kahe hai app ne tu
    be had mamnoon hoon Naz ke aap ne in be tukey alfaaz ko izzat bakhshi,aor is khoobsurat aldaaz main hosala afzaayi ki,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    zain, kya sunatay ho in button ko dard-e-jaa'n
    patharon ke seenay mein dil, jiger nahi hotay..

    wahhhhh.. yaqeenan aap ki ye ghazal aap ke ab tak ke adbi safar ka haasil hai.. ab tak aap ke qalam mein jo nikhaar aaya.. wo iss ghazal ke na sirf her her shair se bulkay eik eik lafz se jhalakta hai .. yaqeenan isay eik mukamal ghazal kaha ja sakta hai .. phir se parh ker acha laga.. magar aap ki awaz mein sun'nay ka apna hi maza tha.. is kamyabi per dhairo'n daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    be had mamnoon hoon Naz ke aap ne in be tukey alfaaz ko izzat bakhshi,aor is khoobsurat aldaaz main hosala afzaayi ki,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    betuki kha hian...itni bhi inkesari achi nahi hoti ghazal waqie bhot umda hia MashALlah
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    Walekam-Aslam
    naz nay sab kuch keh diya hai
    MASHALLAH bohat khubsurat likhtey hein aap
    aap ki mazeed sharing ka intizar rahey ga

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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    zain, kya sunatay ho in button ko dard-e-jaa'n
    patharon ke seenay mein dil, jiger nahi hotay..

    wahhhhh.. yaqeenan aap ki ye ghazal aap ke ab tak ke adbi safar ka haasil hai.. ab tak aap ke qalam mein jo nikhaar aaya.. wo iss ghazal ke na sirf her her shair se bulkay eik eik lafz se jhalakta hai .. yaqeenan isay eik mukamal ghazal kaha ja sakta hai .. phir se parh ker acha laga.. magar aap ki awaz mein sun'nay ka apna hi maza tha.. is kamyabi per dhairo'n daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove

    be had mamnoon hoon bhahi ke aap ne is ghazal ko pasand kartey huye bahot khoobsurat alfaaz o andaaz main hosala afzaayi ki,
    ji haan,woh shaam,woh mehfil merey liye bhi yaadgaar hai,aor rahey gi,zindagi rahi to jab bhi dubara Pakistan aaya,aesi hi mehfil phir se sajaaney ki koshish rahey gi,
    aap ki muhabbaton oar duaon ka aek baar phir se mamnoon hoon,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    zaberdast janab
    ranisrequest - Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    betuki kha hian...itni bhi inkesari achi nahi hoti ghazal waqie bhot umda hia MashALlah
    arrey naheen Naz,yeh inkasaari naheen,haqeeqat hai,woh kehtey hain na ke...
    abhi ishq ke imtahaaN aor bhi hain,
    so abhi to bahot kuchh seekhana baaqi hai,bas yoon samajh lijiye ke abhi to tifl-e-maktab hoon,bas dua kijiye ke raasata aasaan rahey,aor manzil qareeb,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Zain jin parindoN ke baal-o-par naheen hotey

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Walekam-Aslam
    naz nay sab kuch keh diya hai
    MASHALLAH bohat khubsurat likhtey hein aap
    aap ki mazeed sharing ka intizar rahey ga

    be had mamnoon hoon Hijab saahiba ke aap ne waqt nikala,aor hosala afza alfaaz se nawaaza,
    aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
    INSHA ALLAH koshish rahey gi ke aap ko ziyaada intazaar na karna paRey,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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