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    candel Ajnabi Ki Taran!

    Assalamo-Alekam

    Ajanbi - Ajnabi Ki Taran!

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    Bahut Khoob..............

    MY LION

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    bhot he khoubsurat

    pori ghaazal nahi hia ?
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    itni ziyada threads aek hi din main........kher yeh to mods/admins ki job hai ke is ke liye kuchh asool wazza karain,

    sheir aap ka achha hai,lekin shaairy ke ramooz ki tarf khaasi tawajah deney ki zaroorat hai,so agar mumkin ho to kuchh tawajah us tarf bhi dijiye,

    bahot khush rahiye,likhti aor ham se share karti rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    wah...!!!
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    aap sab ka pasand karnay ka shukriya!


    AGAR ZINDAGI MEIN DOUBARA KUCH LIKHA TOU ZAROOR SHARE KAROON GI!

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    hmm..boht khoob ji,,bas heeray ko tarash kharash ki zuroort hay
    love thou - Ajnabi Ki Taran!

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    walaikum-salam

    zer-e-nazr aap ka shair yaqeenan umdah hai .. so bohat si daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. aap ki urran batati hai ke parwaz bohat buland ho sakti hai .. so safar jari rakhiye..likhti raha kjiye.. abhi shairi ki bareekiyo'n mein parnay ki kuch khas zaroorat nahi .. aap bus likhiye .. likhiye .. aur likhiye.. aur phir eik din aap ko rawani .. qafiya .. radeef ki khud ba khud pehchan honay lagy gi.. to uss din janab-e-zain se raabta kijiye ga..mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka Behad Shukria..

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    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Assalam-o-Alikum WRW B

    Bhot umda likhti rahya aur nikhar payda ho ga INSHALLAH

    FeamnAllah

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    wow

    hmsha ki terha bht khoob


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