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    candel Saza Dena Dastoor Tha!

    Assalamo-Alekam!

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    Wa Jee Kia Bat Hai.......

    MY LION

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    Default Re: Saza Dena Dastoor Tha!

    wah jee

    ap ka apna haina ?
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    bahot khoob,achhi koshish hai,
    aap ke liye aek mashwara hai,agar mind na karain to.......
    aek to ustaad sho.ra ko baghor paRain,aor shaairy ke asool-o-zawaabat ko samajhney ki koshish karain,
    aor doosara koshish kiya karain ke sirf aek sheir par hi iktafa na karain,balke ghazal kehney ki koshish karain,is se apne kalaam main bahot behtari paayain gi aap,
    bahot khush rahiye,likhti rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Saza Dena Dastoor Tha!

    bohat khoob
    ranisrequest - Saza Dena Dastoor Tha!

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    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    bahot khoob,achhi koshish hai,
    aap ke liye aek mashwara hai,agar mind na karain to.......
    aek to ustaad sho.ra ko baghor paRain,aor shaairy ke asool-o-zawaabat ko samajhney ki koshish karain,
    aor doosara koshish kiya karain ke sirf aek sheir par hi iktafa na karain,balke ghazal kehney ki koshish karain,is se apne kalaam main bahot behtari paayain gi aap,
    bahot khush rahiye,likhti rahiye,
    mein likhti nahi hoon sir......yeh ashar mein nay kafi arsay pehlay likhay they
    jab bore hoti hoon tou paper pencil nikal leeti hoon........I am not into writing much!
    anyways, Jazak ALLAH for your mashwara!

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    wah jee

    ap ka apna haina ?
    ji likha tou khud he hai....demag mein ayaa aur likh diya!

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    boht khoob,,shaa,iri ka dam kham moajood hay aap main,,boht si daad
    love thou - Saza Dena Dastoor Tha!

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    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Pencil ko khya k ab bore na hua kary umda likha hay to is ko mazeed likhya , aik umda Ghazal aap ka intazar kar rahi hay

    FeamNAllah

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    Default Re: Saza Dena Dastoor Tha!

    wah very nice

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