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    snow -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    Ab teri yaad mein rehna acha lagta hai
    tujhe dua mein maangna acha lagta hai
    ik mudat ho gae tujhe dekhe howe
    aankhein band ker k tujhe dekhna acha lagta hai
    log marne se darte hain magar
    teri judai mein pal pal marna acha lagta hai
    tu paas to nahi hia mere lakin
    tujhe apne pas mehsoos kerna acha lagta hai
    tanha reh ker sari duniya se
    tere bare mein sochna acha lagta hai
    maloom hia tu nahi meri kismat mein
    tujhe apni haathun ki lakirun mein dhoondna acha lagta hai
    meri adhuri mohabbat ki koi takmeel nahi hai "Rabi"
    phr b tere liye sab se bagawat kerna acha lagta hai

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    Assalam-o-ALikum WR WB

    Bhot umda AG , mai nay isi per yani Acha Lagta hay sab sy pahaly Ghazal likhi thi , 15 saal ki age mai per bhool bhi gya aur us waqt kachi umar thi

    Per aap nay nehyat hi umda likha hay khas kar aap ka aakhri shair nay puri Ghazal ko samit liya hy

    Daaad qabool kijya ....

    Baqool kisi k ..

    Wafa aur muhbat k saath

    FeamnAllah

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainMidnight View Post
    Assalam-o-ALikum WR WB

    Bhot umda AG , mai nay isi per yani Acha Lagta hay sab sy pahaly Ghazal likhi thi , 15 saal ki age mai per bhool bhi gya aur us waqt kachi umar thi

    Per aap nay nehyat hi umda likha hay khas kar aap ka aakhri shair nay puri Ghazal ko samit liya hy

    Daaad qabool kijya ....

    Baqool kisi k ..

    Wafa aur muhbat k saath

    FeamnAllah
    w
    ahaan
    bohat shukriya pasand kerne ka

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    Bohat Khoob AD

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    Quote Originally Posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
    Ab teri yaad mein rehna acha lagta hai

    tujhe dua mein maangna acha lagta hai
    ik mudat ho gae tujhe dekhe howe
    aankhein band ker k tujhe dekhna acha lagta hai
    log marne se darte hain magar
    teri judai mein pal pal marna acha lagta hai
    tu paas to nahi hia mere lakin
    tujhe apne pas mehsoos kerna acha lagta hai
    tanha reh ker sari duniya se
    tere bare mein sochna acha lagta hai
    maloom hia tu nahi meri kismat mein
    tujhe apni haathun ki lakirun mein dhoondna acha lagta hai
    meri adhuri mohabbat ki koi takmeel nahi hai "Rabi"

    phr b tere liye sab se bagawat kerna acha lagta hai
    hmm...!!!
    janab achi nazam hai aap ki...!!!
    esey hi likhti rahen aur share kerti rahen...!!!
    khush rahen...
    ~AawarA GambleR~

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    hmmm tumne tu taraki karle hia phele se kahe zaida acha likha hai

    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    buhat zaberdast girl...
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    hmm v nice dear...........

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    hmmm tumne tu taraki karle hia phele se kahe zaida acha likha hai

    thank u bas yaar koshish ker rahi hu

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    Default Re: -=Acha Lagta Hai=-

    waah boht khoob
    aap kay khialat main bari jan hay
    or inshallah waqat kay sath sath mazeed behtari aay gi
    6 th shair ki 2nd line main
    tujhe apni haathun ki lakirun mein dhoondna acha lagta hai
    ki jaga agar kuch youn ho
    hath ki lakenon main tujhay dhondna acha lagta hay.
    to kia khial hay aap ka?
    umeed hay aap is choti c mukhlisana tanqeed ka bura nahin manain gi
    kush rahain or likhti rahain

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