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    snow Mousam


    Her Pal Udaasi ka chahya huwa hay yahan
    Shaakh se eik eik patta alag ho raha hay yahan

    Kaash khizaan ka haal dekhta koi yahan
    Taiz Huwaon ne Sab kuch bikhra dia hay yahan

    Her shajar hey is AaaS par yahan
    Khizaan kay baad Bahaar aayee gi yahan

    Phir Nayee kounplain photain gi yahan
    Phir naye Pattay Niklain gay yahan

    Naa Janay kab Aaye gaa ye samaan
    apne Saath kitne Rang laye ga yahan

    Bas intezaar hay iss bahaar ka hain
    Naa janay kab aaye ga ye Samaan
    Apne saath kitne Rang laye ga yahan


    ( Meri apni likhi huee Gazal... mujay likhna tou nahi aata koshish zaroor ki thi )

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    Bohat achay.. bohat achi koshish hai .. daad qabool kijiye.. aur agar yunhi likhty rahay to eik din bohat hi acha likhny lagen gey..InshaAllah.. aazmyesh shart hai .. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - Mousam

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Assalam-o-alikum WR WB

    Likhna kisi ko nahi aata hay kosish hi ki jaati hay ... aap ko bata ta chalo k jab PBUH per Wahi nazil hui thi to yahi baat Allah nay khi thi ayat Iqra Bis Me Rabi kal lazi khalaq ... to janab likhti rahay ...

    FeamnAllah

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    u bhiiiiiiiiiii is list main agaye
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Aray aap sab ka bohat bohat shukar guzaar hon k aap sab ne meri housla afzaai ki...... waisay aapas ki baat hay.. 3...4 ghazals aur likhi huee hain.. par dar raha tha k kaheen sab mazak naa uraain

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    zaberdast SS
    ranisrequest - Mousam

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    Quote Originally Posted by SiLenT ScReaM View Post
    Her Pal Udaasi ka chahya huwa hay yahan
    Shaakh se eik eik patta alag ho raha hay yahan

    Kaash khizaan ka haal dekhta koi yahan
    Taiz Huwaon ne Sab kuch bikhra dia hay yahan

    Her shajar hey is AaaS par yahan
    Khizaan kay baad Bahaar aayee gi yahan

    Phir Nayee kounplain photain gi yahan
    Phir naye Pattay Niklain gay yahan

    Naa Janay kab Aaye gaa ye samaan
    apne Saath kitne Rang laye ga yahan

    Bas intezaar hay iss bahaar ka hain
    Naa janay kab aaye ga ye Samaan
    Apne saath kitne Rang laye ga yahan


    ( Meri apni likhi huee Gazal... mujay likhna tou nahi aata koshish zaroor ki thi )
    nazm parh kr kisi tarha bhi mahsoos nahi hota kay ye pehli baar ya kisi taaza kaar ki likhi hoi hay,,,boht achi nazm hay or apnay takhleeq kaar kay pukhta roo honay ka suboot hay,,boht saari daad
    love thou - Mousam

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    Quote Originally Posted by Đŕemẹr View Post
    nazm parh kr kisi tarha bhi mahsoos nahi hota kay ye pehli baar ya kisi taaza kaar ki likhi hoi hay,,,boht achi nazm hay or apnay takhleeq kaar kay pukhta roo honay ka suboot hay,,boht saari daad

    Aray main iss qabil kahan

    thanx dost

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    zaberdast SS

    thankoo thankoo

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    bht achi Khoshish hai

    bilkul nahi laga k app new writter ho

    zbrdst ..

    keep sharing vth us

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