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    shot -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    Mein rait ki tarha hun ye mujhe tab ehsaas howa jab usne mujhe bohat pyaar se bohat maan se apne pas rakha tha aur mein to bas uski muthi mein qaid thi her pal bas ussi k liye jeeti thi aur jaise hi usne apni muthi kholi aur mein bikhar gae ... Mujhe yun bikhra ker aur tanha chor ker chala gaya ... ajj bhi mein bilkul waisi hi hun .... wohi bikhri si ladki ... Rait ki manid .. Hawa ka jhonka ata hai aur mujhe bakhair deta hai
    Hawa k jhoonke se muraad = apne mehboob ki yaad hai
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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    hmm, acha likha hay,,imla ki aik jaga ``bikhra`` ki jaga ``bakhair`` kr kr lain,,wesay boht acha or mukhtasir sa afsana likha hay,,keep ur writnig
    love thou - -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    thank u
    oh orite mein theek kerti hun

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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    acha likha hy ....khoobsorat

    keep writting dear

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    bohat thankx

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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    tumhe kiya hogaya hia
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    kuch b nahi

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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    haseeen tareeeeeeeeen likha hai tumnay jo dil ki gehrayioon ko chuh jay waqi sach main. ye afsana hai ya haqiqat?

    Ansuaoon nay ghamoo say ghabraa kar
    palkooon say gir k khud kushi karli


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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    haye thank u soooooo much
    tehreer hai
    wo aisa nahi hai jo mujhe akela chor de ga

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    Default Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    salam,

    socha tumnay itna acha misra kaha is k agay main kuch laga don k complete ho jay

    wo aisa nahi hai jo mujhe akela chor de ga
    wo khud main rakh kar mujhe lazaawal karde ga

    tumharay itnay khubsorat misray ko us ki takmeel deni chahiye
    Kush raho
    Allah hafiz

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