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    snow Khuwaish


    Iss se Pahlay kay Shaam Dhal jayee
    Koi subah Mere Naam kar Do

    Bohat Khizaan ne muj ko Lota hey
    Sari Baharain Mere Naam kar do

    Ye Kalyaan,phool ye Raaniyon kay jo Un Paiker
    Apne Jazbon ki Tamaam Tar Sachaiyaan
    Gar ho sakay tou mere Naam kar do

    Meri khuwaish Mera Dum Naa Lai lain
    Simat kar Naa Rah jayee Aankhon main Dum

    Iss se pahlay.....

    Iss se pahlay kay Dum Nikal jayee
    Mera tum aakhiri kaam kar do

    Apne Dil ki dharkan mere naam kar do
    Aisa Naa ho kay Shaam Dhal jayee....



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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    khoob janab.. nazm kehnay ki achi koshish rahi .. ik tarap thi.. yunhi mehnat se likhty rahiye.. aur bhi nikhar aaye ga.. daad qabool kijiye.. Shukria..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - Khuwaish

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    bht khoob likha hy .....

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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    nice dear

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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    bohat khub

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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    achi koshish hai or baki sub poetry main yeh zaida achi hai
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    wah bht khoob.....bht achi feeling hai iss may

    udasi b hai , hope b hai, intazar b hai..

    zbrdst

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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    wah janab jazbon ki sachai say saji hoi aik khobsorat nazam boht khoob likha kush rahin or likhtay rahain

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    Bahoot khoobsurat poetry
    nice one
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - Khuwaish

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    Default Re: Khuwaish

    Thanx aap sab ka k aap sab ne pasand ki aur meri hosla afzaii ki

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