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    asking zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM dosto,
    aek nayi ghazal ke saath aek baar phir haazir hoon,kesi lagi,bataaiye ga zaroor,intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,


    zindagihaathjabchhuraayeto - zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    wah janab kia kehnay
    boht hi khobsorat ghazal kahi aap nay
    boht ziada pasand aai khas tor per yeh shair
    to boht zaida pasand aaya
    sochtay zain sab hain sadion ka
    sans agla hi gar naa aay to
    kush rahin or likhtay rahin

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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    tum to kab ke khuda bhula bethay
    wo bhi tum ko jo bhool jaye to ?

    wahhhhh.. bhae kya kehnay.. MashaAllah.. khoob se khoob'tar likhtay ja rahay hein.. ghazal behad pasand aayee..maqta ke to kya kehnay.. aseer zehno mein soch bharnay ki umdah koshish.. dhairo'n mubarak'baad iss kamyabi ki nazar.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    v nice...
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    wah janab zain kiya khe kehne ap ke

    Tu? wah maza agaya umda janab..bhot he acha likhne lage hian app.dhairon dad qabol kijeye
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    Quote Originally Posted by primitive View Post
    wah janab kia kehnay
    boht hi khobsorat ghazal kahi aap nay
    boht ziada pasand aai khas tor per yeh shair
    to boht zaida pasand aaya
    sochtay zain sab hain sadion ka
    sans agla hi gar naa aay to
    kush rahin or likhtay rahin

    be had mamnoon hoon Bhahi ke aap ne hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi hosala afza kalmaat se nawaaza,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    tum to kab ke khuda bhula bethay
    wo bhi tum ko jo bhool jaye to ?

    wahhhhh.. bhae kya kehnay.. MashaAllah.. khoob se khoob'tar likhtay ja rahay hein.. ghazal behad pasand aayee..maqta ke to kya kehnay.. aseer zehno mein soch bharnay ki umdah koshish.. dhairo'n mubarak'baad iss kamyabi ki nazar.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    ghazal ko pasand karney,saraahaney,aor is qadar khoobsurat alfaaz main hosala afzaayi ke aap ka be had mamnoon,aor aap ki muhabaton ka qarzdaar hoon bhahi,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    v nice...
    be had mamnoon hoon Dua saahiba ke aap ne is ghazal ko pasandeedagi ki sanad ata ki,
    aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    wah janab zain kiya khe kehne ap ke

    Tu? wah maza agaya umda janab..bhot he acha likhne lage hian app.dhairon dad qabol kijeye


    bahot shukriya,bahot nawaazish Naz,ke aap ne ghazal paRi,pasand ki,aor hosala afza kalmaat se nawaaza,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: zindagi haath jab chhuraaye to

    Walekam-Aslam
    it's one of your most amazing poetry.it's very true and touchy!

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