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    *~~ kiya batain ~~*


    Kiya batain kiya kiya ganwa diya
    jawani ka pal pal luta diya

    mohabbat ka deep jo jalaya tha mill kar
    ik shab aakar us ne bhuja diya

    mein to kajal ki tarah tha
    us ne aankhoon se aakhir baha diya

    maut ki duain ab mein maangta nahi
    be maot marna us ne sikha diya

    bazam -e- duniya se bezaar ho kar
    tanhai ko galay se laga diya

    A ishq tu ne Anjum ko ye kiya bana diya
    ik shareer larka tha shaair bana diya
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - *~~ kiya batain ~~*

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    mohabbat ka deep jo jalaya tha mill kar
    ik shab aakar us ne bhuja diya

    umda janab
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    bohat khoob janab.. achi kawish rahi .. daad qabool kijiye.. aur likhty rahiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - *~~ kiya batain ~~*

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    buhat he zaberdast..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - *~~ kiya batain ~~*

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    achhi kaawish aor koshish hai janaab,so meri tarf se bhi daad qabool kijiye,
    likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: *~~ kiya batain ~~*

    v niceeeee

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    bhai wasi sahb boht umda,,sach poochiye to boht hi lutf aaya aapki ghazal parh kay.
    love thou - *~~ kiya batain ~~*

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    mohabbat ka deep jo jalaya tha mill kar
    ik shab aakar us ne bhuja diya

    umda janab
    Bahoot bahoot shukriya Naz

    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    bohat khoob janab.. achi kawish rahi .. daad qabool kijiye.. aur likhty rahiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove
    Shukriya with love

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    buhat he zaberdast..
    Shukriya Dua
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - *~~ kiya batain ~~*

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    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    achhi kaawish aor koshish hai janaab,so meri tarf se bhi daad qabool kijiye,
    likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Shukriya Zain

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*zaib*~ View Post
    v niceeeee
    thanx
    Quote Originally Posted by Đŕemẹr View Post
    bhai wasi sahb boht umda,,sach poochiye to boht hi lutf aaya aapki ghazal parh kay.
    Bahoot shukriya janab
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - *~~ kiya batain ~~*

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    Default Re: *~~ kiya batain ~~*

    Wah bohat khoob huzoor....Jis khoobsurti se aapne lafzon ko tarteeb ke saath istemaal
    kiya hai woh waqaii qaabil-e-daad hai issai kubool kijeeyai.

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