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    ASLAAM O ALEKUM dosto,
    main aek baar phir haazir,apni aek nayi nazam ke saath,
    umeed hai bardaasht karain ge,
    aap ki aara ka intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,


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    Last edited by ishtiaq zain; 27-03-2008 at 01:32 AM.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: nazam,.....Iltimaas

    nice............
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    Default Re: nazam,.....Iltimaas

    Walekam-Aslam
    ah........wow........lajwaab
    I have nothing much to say!
    it's just superb
    last line was amazingly said!

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    uf ye tu bohat hia cha likha hai aap nay wow its superb ..................v nice

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    waah zain jaani,,kiya iltimaas kiya hay kay ,,qaari ko bhi pather ka kr diya ,,boht saari daad(jo daynay kay main laaiq nahi) tumhari nazar,tumharay yehan aanay say is pc main aanay janay ka man krnay laga hay,
    love thou - nazam,.....Iltimaas

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    wahhhhhhh.. janab-e-zain.. nazm yaqeenan qabil-e-satayes aur daad-o-tehseen ki haqdar hai .. so haq ada kiye detay hein.. qabool kijiye.. meri tarah bohat se qari'een aap ke jaisi uqaabi nazar nahi rakhtay hon gi .. so nazm ke asal lutf se mehroom rahay hon gey.. tehreer bohat choti hai.. Nawazish..

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    koitaveezho - nazam,.....Iltimaas

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    BHIA JEE maine koshish ki hia leken zaida saf nahi hua me se tu hergiz bhi nahi parhe jane nazam
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    soch raha hon kia likhon  1 - nazam,.....Iltimaas
    iak aisa shahkar takhlleq kia
    jis per khalik jitna fakhar karay kam hay
    yeh alag baat is shahkar ki
    takhllq main dill kis tarah lahoo hoa
    sab say bara karab takhleeq ka karab hota hay
    jo sirf woh hi mehsoos kar sakta hay
    jo is tajrubay say guzra ho
    or yeh kamal e fan hay k
    is karab ka naqsha kuch is tarah khenca jay
    parhnay wala yeh mehsoos karay
    k yeh sab kuch us kay oper guzri hay
    yaqeen karo parh kar dill lahoo lahoo ho gia
    aik master peice
    boht hi zabardast or intahai mayari nazam
    dhari sari daad aap ki is kawash ki nazar
    kush rahain or likhtay rahin

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    BHIA JEE maine koshish ki hia leken zaida saf nahi hua me se tu hergiz bhi nahi parhe jane nazam
    ab try karain,shaaid ab behtar ho,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: nazam,.....Iltimaas

    haan jee ab sahe hia

    main kabbbbbbbbbbbbbb likhongi aisa
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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