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    Default I was once sad and lonely,

    I was once sad and lonely,
    Having nobody to comfort me,
    So I wore a mask that always smiled;
    To hide my feelings behind a lie.

    Before long, I had many friends;
    With my mask, I was one of them.
    But deep inside, I still felt empty,
    Like I was missing a part of me.

    Nobody could hear my cries at night
    For I designed my mask to hide the lies.
    Nobody could see the pain I was feeling
    For I designed my mask to be laughing.

    Behind all the smiles were the tears
    And behind all the comfort were the fears.
    Everything you think you see,
    Wasn't everything there was to me.

    Day by day,
    I was slowly dying.
    I couldn't go on,
    There was something missing..

    Until now I'm still searching
    For the thing that'll stop my crying.
    For someone who'll erase my fears,
    For the person who'll wipe my tears.

    But till then I'll keep on smiling.
    Hiding behind this mask I'm wearing.
    Hoping one day I can smile,
    Till then, I'll be here.. waiting.


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    Default Re: I was once sad and lonely,

    beautiful poem, really love it... this is how most of the people are, hidding their feelings deep inside and showing a charming face outside

    it took so many lines in ENGLISH poetry to describe such feeling however in URDU poetry the same feeling is said in few lines

    Humain kisi ki, kisi ko humari zaroorat na thi
    Yoon tou sab kuch tha, magar ek kami see thi
    Buland-o-baang qheqahay lagatay rahay mefil main
    Magar jab ankhon main dekha, tou ek namii si thi!!

    Khush rahye, thanks for sharing.

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    Default Re: I was once sad and lonely,

    very nice poem

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    Default Re: I was once sad and lonely,

    Nice.........



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    Default Re: I was once sad and lonely,

    Behind all the smiles were the tears
    And behind all the comfort were the fears.
    Everything you think you see,
    Wasn't everything there was to me.

    awsome


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    Default Re: I was once sad and lonely,

    nice poem

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