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    Default Your words vibrate through my soul

    Your words vibrate through my soul
    Awakenings and racing thoughts on the go
    My heart has been hit
    You need to know
    My friends flash warnings
    Love and concern casts their doubts
    How could I know
    They steer me away
    In the shadows I stay
    Not letting go
    My mind has lost control
    I just don’t know
    Ulterior motives
    Player on the move
    All possibilities
    What do I have to lose
    I voice my fears
    Heart already shakes and quivers
    You listen and feel
    “Patience” you reveal
    I’m scared
    I’m excited
    I’m anxious
    I’m delighted
    Emotions unlocked
    I let you in
    Feelings enhanced
    There’s no return
    Your words sing to me
    Time soars by
    I’m entranced by you
    Pure laughter and joy
    I feel a great loss
    When we’re unable to talk
    I can never get enough
    You’ve become a part of me

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    Assalaam-O-alaikum

    WECLOME to Sachiidosti new dost, and thank you for sharing this poem.

    Loved the way, poet has described the feeling of a person 'FRESHLY in love', however this is an admission of 'unkown feeling' the person is going through after getting into love for the first time....... however there is a long way to go, some pass the way and get to the success of finding the one they love and some suffer the severe pain after loosing the one they love.... overall LOVE leaves utterly butterly feeling into our hearts

    After reading your poem, I remember few lines of poetry written in urdu and would like share the same:

    Maktab–e–Ishq ka dastoor niraaala dekha!!!
    Usii ko chuttii na mili, jisney sabaq yaad kya

    Thanks for sharing, khush rahyeh


    Quote Originally Posted by Naughty Cat View Post
    Your words vibrate through my soul
    Awakenings and racing thoughts on the go
    My heart has been hit
    You need to know
    My friends flash warnings
    Love and concern casts their doubts
    How could I know
    They steer me away
    In the shadows I stay
    Not letting go
    My mind has lost control
    I just don’t know
    Ulterior motives
    Player on the move
    All possibilities
    What do I have to lose
    I voice my fears
    Heart already shakes and quivers
    You listen and feel
    “Patience” you reveal
    I’m scared
    I’m excited
    I’m anxious
    I’m delighted
    Emotions unlocked
    I let you in
    Feelings enhanced
    There’s no return
    Your words sing to me
    Time soars by
    I’m entranced by you
    Pure laughter and joy
    I feel a great loss
    When we’re unable to talk
    I can never get enough
    You’ve become a part of me
    Last edited by thefire1; 20-10-2013 at 01:17 PM.

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    nice........


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