bohat zabardast episode hai... keep sharing... thanx
I can understand where the story is heading.. try to give it a different end rather than the same story.. that would be great.. in some of the sentences I noticed that the details given are insufficient for example..
"mosofa ne phone py tarkha dia tha @birthday which passed a month ago"
as an author u know what u r talking about but as a reader I couldn't really understand. but I guess that mosofa is Aqsa? so instead mosofa word should have been Aqsa!!
the character ayat is going well.. try to put some Saram show. I like his jokes.. all serious story leads to u know get a bit boring.. joke keep it alive..!
waiting for next episode... Cheers !! and thumbs up /up
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