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    Default Re: LAMHON K AZAAB(epi 2)

    bohat zabardast episode hai... keep sharing... thanx
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    I can understand where the story is heading.. try to give it a different end rather than the same story.. that would be great.. in some of the sentences I noticed that the details given are insufficient for example..
    "mosofa ne phone py tarkha dia tha @birthday which passed a month ago"
    as an author u know what u r talking about but as a reader I couldn't really understand. but I guess that mosofa is Aqsa? so instead mosofa word should have been Aqsa!!
    the character ayat is going well.. try to put some Saram show. I like his jokes.. all serious story leads to u know get a bit boring.. joke keep it alive..!
    waiting for next episode... Cheers !! and thumbs up /up


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    Default Re: LAMHON K AZAAB(epi 2)

    Quote Originally Posted by *jamshed* View Post
    bohat zabardast episode hai... keep sharing... thanx
    Shukriah paen
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    Quote Originally Posted by captain planet View Post
    I can understand where the story is heading.. try to give it a different end rather than the same story.. that would be great.. in some of the sentences I noticed that the details given are insufficient for example..
    "mosofa ne phone py tarkha dia tha @birthday which passed a month ago"
    as an author u know what u r talking about but as a reader I couldn't really understand. but I guess that mosofa is Aqsa? so instead mosofa word should have been Aqsa!!
    the character ayat is going well.. try to put some Saram show. I like his jokes.. all serious story leads to u know get a bit boring.. joke keep it alive..!
    waiting for next episode... Cheers !! and thumbs up /up
    Thanx 4 liking..hanji it meant by Aqsa bt story doesn't seems good ven u calls the character's name repeatedly
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    Default Re: LAMHON K AZAAB(epi 2)

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm NO WORDS FOR COMMENTX ..........Isi tarha lagay rahiye......

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    Default Re: LAMHON K AZAAB(epi 2)

    Quote Originally Posted by shazia rana View Post


    Thanx 4 liking..hanji it meant by Aqsa bt story doesn't seems good ven u calls the character's name repeatedly
    ok but use name where it is necessary :


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    Default Re: LAMHON K AZAAB(epi 2)

    Quote Originally Posted by captain planet View Post


    ok but use name where it is necessary :
    G ainda khyal rakhun gi
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