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    Default Ek Or Din Dhal Gaya Tere Intezaar Mein,

    Ek or din dhal gaya tere intezaar mein,
    Paglon ki tarah dhundhta raha mein tujhe, gali mohale baazar mein,
    Tu na aayi, na hi tujhe milna tha mujhse,
    Mujhe bhi bula raha tha maykhaana, ek wo hi to tha mere intzaar mein,
    Dil lagta nahin tha aab is begaane sansaar mein,
    Sab paraae se lagte the mujhe aapne hi parivaar mein,
    Kya paaya kya khooya mat puchho,
    Mein jeet kar bhi haara tha baaji is pyar mein,
    Na mein patjadh mein ujdda, na hi khila kabhi bahaar mein,
    Kuch to wajah thi jo tufaan k baad bhi bacha tha dum meri patwaar mein,
    Bhool jaata tujhe mein shayad,
    Gar door mujhse hui hoti tu, teri-meri kisi takraar mein,
    Koi bhool jaata hai, koi rehta hai qayamat tak intezaar mein,
    Koi rehta hai isi jahan mein, koi pahunch jaata hai khuda k darbaar mein,
    SHAAZ bhi sochta baith k fursat mein kabhi kabhi,
    Kya haasil huaa dard or zakhmon k siva, dilon k is vyapaar mein.

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    Nice.!

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    Quote Originally Posted by UuLO0oº View Post
    Nice.!
    thx
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    achii tarah aap nay apnay ehsaasaat ki akaasii kii hay.... meray khayal say you have been very generous in using words... aap ko misroo main alfaaz ki tadaad ka khayal rakhna zaroori hay... agar aap nay likhii hay tou bohat achii koshish hay... aur agar aap nay share kii hay tou well done

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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    achii tarah aap nay apnay ehsaasaat ki akaasii kii hay.... meray khayal say you have been very generous in using words... aap ko misroo main alfaaz ki tadaad ka khayal rakhna zaroori hay... agar aap nay likhii hay tou bohtat achii koshish hay... aur agar aap nay share kii hay tou well done
    thx bro for like main nai likhi passand ayi tu share kar di or hum kahan likh saktay bro anpar banda hon
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    bohat say sha'air aisay hain jo ziyada paRhay likhay nahin hain, main aap ko list bhi farahim kar sakta hoon....

    Sha'ayeri kay liye sab say ahaam cheese hay ehsaas..., jo bohat ziyada soch samajh kar likhii jaati hay woh meri nazar main shaayeri nahin balkay srif aik 'Tehreer' hay....!!

    kabhi likhnay ki koshish karna.....
    Quote Originally Posted by changa View Post
    thx bro for like main nai likhi passand ayi tu share kar di or hum kahan likh saktay bro anpar banda hon

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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    bohat say sha'air aisay hain jo ziyada paRhay likhay nahin hain, main aap ko list bhi farahim kar sakta hoon....

    Sha'ayeri kay liye sab say ahaam cheese hay ehsaas..., jo bohat ziyada soch samajh kar likhii jaati hay woh meri nazar main shaayeri nahin balkay srif aik 'Tehreer' hay....!!

    kabhi likhnay ki koshish karna.....
    bro i know but hum is kam say door
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