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    Default Writer's club compition january...

    ASSLAM-O-ALAIKUM

    tamaam doston ko khush amdeed




    iss maheene men ap logon ki pasand ka topic lai hun

    yani sab ko naye saal pe kuch na kuch likhna hai

    chahe wo iqtabas,afsana ya koi khubsurat bat ho k ap new year kese

    manate hen ya kuch logon ki tara nai manate tu is ki wajah byan kren



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    New Year...................kesay manatey hain..or q nahi manatey hain...hmmmmm bs ini 2 baton per likhnaa hai ???

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    Quote Originally Posted by King Kong View Post
    New Year...................kesay manatey hain..or q nahi manatey hain...hmmmmm bs ini 2 baton per likhnaa hai ???
    g..................
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    Quote Originally Posted by shazia rana View Post

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    Wa alaikum aslam !
    Kisi din ko manany k liye us mai khasiyat hona zrori hai magar ye niya saal !!
    Ye Naya saal.......hindson mai taghayyur k siwa kuch naya nhi laya.... Sb kuch to osi jamood mai hai , na hum badly na ap ! Na khayal badly na hi aadat ! Na andaz badlay na halat! mera Chaman jal raha tha jal raha hai...zulm ki siyahi osi tra barqarar hai...hum ghaflat ki neend so rahy hain...fiza mazlomon ki siskiyoun ka boj uthaye hai...zameen laho se tr ho rahi hai...hum zwal ki traf ja rahy hain apne safar ko barqarar rakhty hoay..apni khudgharzi, ghaflat, la-ilmi or khush gumani k hamrah !! ........ Han jb meri zindagi mai aisa koi niya saal aya k jb zulm k sary badal chut jayen, mere chaman (PAK) pe bahar aye.. Roshni ka inqalab aa jaye jis ka mere dil ko shiddat se intezar hai to phir mai Hindson k taghayyur ka intzar kiye bghair us naye saal ka muskurahton or Mubarak se Isteqbal kron gi !!

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    Aslamalikum my entry

    saal 2013 bhot si khushiyan,gham or umeed dila kr guzar gya.ab hr tarf amad amad ha 2014 ki naye saal ki khushi main log ak dosre ko mubarak bad daty hain.gfts daty hain cakes katy jaty hain.
    goya hr shakhs is ko apne tareke se manany k liye bharpor kosish karta ha.
    kahty hain her chez k 2 points hoty hain ak posative jo abhi ap k samne main ny paish kiya or ak negative hota ha.
    Negative point is ka ya ha k hmara mazhb Islam hamain is tehwar ko manany ki Ijazat nhe deta ku k hamare mazhb main ak saal guzarne ka maqsad hota hy hamari zindagi ka ak saal kam ho gya ha.
    to jis bat pr hamain dukhi hona chahye us pr khushi manana kaha ki Aqalmandi ha.kis kitab main likha ha ager apki zindagi main 10 saal hain or ak kam ho gya ha to is pr khushi manae?
    main is liye new year nhe manati ku k hmara mazhb is bat ijazat nhe deta or na hi mera emaan.
    saal 2014 ka suraj wahi suraj ha jo 1947 ko tulu hova tha yani is ka hr din hr tehwar wahi hoga jo 1947 ka tha.
    meri dua ha saal 2014 hamare Mulk pakistan k liye acha ho or is ka hr din hr subha hum sb k liye sahet izat or halal rizaq ly kr aye or koi asa shakh samne aye jo hamare mulk se ghurbat,berozgari or mehngai ki lanat ko dor kar dy ameen sum ameen

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cute PaRi View Post
    Aslamalikum my entry

    saal 2013 bhot si khushiyan,gham or umeed dila kr guzar gya.ab hr tarf amad amad ha 2014 ki naye saal ki khushi main log ak dosre ko mubarak bad daty hain.gfts daty hain cakes katy jaty hain.
    goya hr shakhs is ko apne tareke se manany k liye bharpor kosish karta ha.
    kahty hain her chez k 2 points hoty hain ak posative jo abhi ap k samne main ny paish kiya or ak negative hota ha.
    Negative point is ka ya ha k hmara mazhb Islam hamain is tehwar ko manany ki Ijazat nhe deta ku k hamare mazhb main ak saal guzarne ka maqsad hota hy hamari zindagi ka ak saal kam ho gya ha.
    to jis bat pr hamain dukhi hona chahye us pr khushi manana kaha ki Aqalmandi ha.kis kitab main likha ha ager apki zindagi main 10 saal hain or ak kam ho gya ha to is pr khushi manae?
    main is liye new year nhe manati ku k hmara mazhb is bat ijazat nhe deta or na hi mera emaan.
    saal 2014 ka suraj wahi suraj ha jo 1947 ko tulu hova tha yani is ka hr din hr tehwar wahi hoga jo 1947 ka tha.
    meri dua ha saal 2014 hamare Mulk pakistan k liye acha ho or is ka hr din hr subha hum sb k liye sahet izat or halal rizaq ly kr aye or koi asa shakh samne aye jo hamare mulk se ghurbat,berozgari or mehngai ki lanat ko dor kar dy ameen sum ameen
    mujhe 1947 wali line ki samajh nai ai.
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    Quote Originally Posted by shazia rana View Post

    mujhe 1947 wali line ki samajh nai ai.
    1947 ka celndr or 2014 ka clendr ak jasa ha hr day ak jasi ha

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    Assalaam-O-alaikum

    2014 ki aamad hay yaani 'Tera Gaya' chalain iss baar iss topic per aik nazm likhta hoon... apnay hi andaaz main, aur mukhtalif shouba-e-hayaat say taaluq rakhnay waaloon ki soch bayan karta hoon yeh rahii meri entry...!


    NAYA SAAL

    Ghareeb Awam!
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Joon ka tuu hay hum per mehngayii ka azaab
    Ameeron kay yonhi hain band, hum per baab
    Yoonhi sehtay hain hum iss zindagi kay ataab
    Terii aamad ka phir yeh sab charcha kia hay
    Teray aanay yaa jaanay say badla kia hay

    Politicans
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Yonhii karta hoon qatal rozz apnay zameer ka
    Yonhii chamcha bana rehta hoon wazeer ka
    Badshah aaj bhi hoon main apni taqreer ka
    Srif hindsay kay badalnay say hota kia hay
    Teray aanay yaa jaanay say badla kia hay

    Aashiq (Sachay waalay)
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Wohi shab-o-roz ka tanhayii main rona mera
    Wohi gham-e-ishq main jaltay huway sona mera
    Wohi deedar ki khuwahish main taRapna mera
    Saal badanlay ka bhala yeh silsila kia hay
    Teray aanay yaa jaanay say badla kia hay

    Aashiq (dil phaink meray type )
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Wohi humara shab-o-roz ishq main khuwar hona
    Kabhi sandal tou kabhi danday ka shikar hona
    Kabhi College, kabhi Uni, Kabhi office main pyar hona
    Yeh aashiq, teray badalnay say sudhra kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay


    Abhi abhi likhi hay, ghaltii ki paishgii maazrat Enjoy

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cute PaRi View Post


    1947 ka celndr or 2014 ka clendr ak jasa ha hr day ak jasi ha
    ahaan /up
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