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    cute Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

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    "Oh Allah, Forgive my Sins and give me strength that

    I can stay on Siraat-al-Mustaqeem - Aameen"


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    Default Re: Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

    bht khoobsurat ghazal hai

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    Thanks Heer ji for the compliment.....u welcome.
    "Oh Allah, Forgive my Sins and give me strength that

    I can stay on Siraat-al-Mustaqeem - Aameen"


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    Default Re: Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

    yar u itne color ku use karte zara lite color bhi use kiya karo na..ghazal bhot achi hia.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    nice Ghazal
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    wo khushqismat loag - Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

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    txt improve karien....choice achi hai


    stroke kam diya karien...or dark colour ka diya karien....ager writting dark hai tu strok lyt day diya karien.....or shadows use kiye karien....blending options use ker ker k dekha karien kaisay neat or acha laging InshaAllah improvment ho jaye gi..
    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

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    nice work.....
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    Default Re: Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

    good try

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    Default Re: Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

    Thanks to All.....................for your nice nice cute cute good good advices and comments..............or naz jee..................u too correct....but...aik tu light color meray say waqi main sahe tarah ni istimal horaha...or dusri ye..k ab shukar karo k text tu parha gaya na ap logon say..may tu soch rha tha tha k meray ilawa koi na parh sakay ga..is liye tu kabhi kabhi LIKHAY MOOSA PARHAY KHUDA wali harkatain krtain krtay hain..........hmmmmm keep up smile will try 2rectify the week points.............all the best....and keep up visiiting/////
    Last edited by un4getable; 01-12-2008 at 11:14 AM.
    "Oh Allah, Forgive my Sins and give me strength that

    I can stay on Siraat-al-Mustaqeem - Aameen"


    sachiiiidu7 - Tera Dar Tha Teri Aas thee!!

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