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    snow Poem Of The Day 20th January 2014




    Always
    © By Brandon A. Swaggerty


    The day you were born, the whole world was blessed
    These thoughts in my mind to you I must confess

    The time has come for me to express my true feelings
    You are the center of my thoughts and the essence of my being

    What you have brought me I never thought I could procure
    The gift of comfort, with you I am secure

    For you have lifted me up from a life filled with sorrow
    And made me realize there is always a better tomorrow

    It amazes me how someone can make me feel this way
    I love you more and more with each passing day

    You brighten my days and lift my spirits
    I have felt this for so long and now want you to hear it

    So you may know the place you hold in my heart
    You are always with me even when we're apart

    I truly believe what we have is meant to be
    Just open your heart and soon you shall see

    What I am willing to do to keep a smile on your face
    Just know that I'm here and will be always




    3297731y763i7owcz zps9ed156a3 - Poem Of The Day 20th January 2014

    MAY OUR COUNTRY PROGRESS IN EVERYWHERE AND IN EVERYTHING SO THAT THE WHOLE WORLD SHOULD HAVE PROUD ON US
    PAKISTAN ZINDABAD











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    Lovely Poem

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    walaikum assalaam

    if the author is taking about her love of life than he is wrong in stating that whole world was blessed.

    he should replace 'the whole' to 'my' which makes some sense... anyways, i am not poet I am just expressing what I feel should be the right approach

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    /up


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    Sweet.......

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    3297731y763i7owcz zps9ed156a3 - Poem Of The Day 20th January 2014

    MAY OUR COUNTRY PROGRESS IN EVERYWHERE AND IN EVERYTHING SO THAT THE WHOLE WORLD SHOULD HAVE PROUD ON US
    PAKISTAN ZINDABAD











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    Very Nice. .........



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