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    How long can we stand ?
    How long can we stick ?
    To claim our rights
    We must be quick..................

    We must be unite.
    We must not fight.
    To spread peace & love
    We must be polite..................


    The more we neglect,
    More difficult it will get,
    We must work to cure
    Before our soul is dead............

    There should be the rule
    Of only justice,
    Islam should become
    our usual practice.
    We must learn to sacrifice
    Stop being selfish and unwise.............


    By AROSA HYA

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    very well written @Arosa Hya; full marks to your thinking and deep concern over the situation of muslim umaah.

    there are some mistakes in writing, and I am sure reading it again, you would correct it yourself

    Khush rahyeh and keep writing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    very well written @Arosa Hya; full marks to your thinking and deep concern over the situation of muslim umaah.

    there are some mistakes in writing, and I am sure reading it again, you would correct it yourself

    Khush rahyeh and keep writing.
    yes yes i know but that's correction will be by @Chandbhai

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    OK once it is corrected by @chadnbhai;, please mention me so that I can read the revised and corrected version of this beautiful poem... keep writing, khush rahyeh
    Quote Originally Posted by Arosa Hya View Post
    yes yes i know but that's correction will be by @Chandbhai

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    sorry for spelling mistake in my post, I have incorrectly mentioned..... @Chandbhai;

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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    OK once it is corrected by @chadnbhai;, please mention me so that I can read the revised and corrected version of this beautiful poem... keep writing, khush rahyeh

    Ok e mr fire ,,,,,,

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    Acha bitya edit karna hai...theek hai..par lovely thoughts

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    Beautiful /up .....



    دل اگر بے نقاب ھوتے

    تو سوچو..! کتنے فساد ھوتے




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    Aadab !

    Thank you so much my dear chanda mamu @Chandbhai

    here you can read @thefire1

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    Thank you @Chandbhai; and @Arosa Hya;

    Jazakum ALLAH Khair for sharing such inspirational lines, we must work towards benefiting ourselves with these words and make ourselves a good mulsim................... khush rahyeh

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