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    Thumbs up Mere Baite; Tere Sath Aisa Nahi Hoga

    shayad usay koi daad dainay wala. .. .. .. .! ! !

    mein computer screen par nazrain jamaye apne dostoo se mehv _ guftagu tha jab mera paanch sala beta shool se wapas aaya, , kaafi khush lag raha tha, mozay utaartay hue bola ,
    papa, aik cheez dukhaao, , ?
    haan dikhao beta, ,, mein ne log off hotay hue kaha, , ,. . .
    is ne kaha, aisay nahi pehlay ankhen band karo, , ,
    uf, ,, yeh bachay bhi na, , kabhi kabhi bohat suspense peda karne ki koshish karte hain go ke un se hota nahi, , ,
    mein ne ankhen band kar len, , is ne apne baste se aik copy nikaal kar mere haath par rakh di, ,
    mein ne ankhen khol kar dekha aur poocha, yeh kya he, , ?
    kehnay laga, , aap usay khol kar dekhen, ,
    mein ne copy kholi, , is ne so tak bilkul durust ginti likhi thi jis par usay aik star aur good mila tha, ,
    mein ne is ki taraf dekha, ,, woh mujhe daad talab nazron se dekh raha tha, , ,
    ,, aur mein samajh gaya, , ,
    bhae wah hay hay, ,, ,, mein khushi se chikha, , mere betay ko star mila he, , wah kya baat he, ,, mein ne usay gilaay laga liya aur pyar kya, , ,
    kuch der baad woh bahar khailnay keliye chala gaya, ,
    mein ne dobarah Facebook par log in hona chaha, , lekin nah ho saka, meri ungelian kaam nahi kar rahi theen, , shayad mein kuch soch raha tha, , ,
    mujhe aaj se paintees saal pehlay ka aik bacha maazi ke jharokoon se jhankta nazar araha tha, , woh bhi isi terhan shool se good le kar aata tha magar pata nahi kyun zindagi ki daur mein sab se peechay reh gaya, ,
    shayad usay koi daad dainay wala nahi tha, koi hosla badhaane wala, koi peeth thoknay wala usay nah mil saka tha, , ,
    mere betay ؛ tairay sath aisa nahi ho ga, mein barbaraya .

    tehreer : qaari Hanif daar
    Last edited by Sachii Dosti; 18-12-2014 at 04:00 PM.


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    achi tahreer

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    bahut khoobsurat tehreer...........
    kuch alfaz mixed hogaye but its allright.. parha ja sakta hai easily ...
    share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahen

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    Assalaam-O-alaikum

    Bohat khoob @Dolly; aap ki yeh tehreer bohat hi sabaq amooz aur qaabil-e-tehseen hay, yaqeenan aaj humaray maashray ki bohat saari kharabiyon main say aik kharaabi yeh bhi hay kay hum 'dil khool kay' dosray kay achay kaam per 'daad' nahin daitay, kehnay ko tou humaray chand alfaaz hain, magar yeh kisi ki zindagi per bohat musbat asar laa saktay hain... aur bilkhusoos bachoon ki zindagi main jo apnay ibtidayii zindagi main har cheese ko zeh-nasheen rakhtay hain, aur apnay baRoo kay naqsh-o-kadam per chaltay hain.... humari musbat soch, aur humaray musbat iqdaam unn ki soch ko bhi mustahkam aur musbat bannanay main madadgaar saabit ho saktay hain.

    THANKS AGAIN, please keep sharing such great writings to keep adding such great jewels to the 'treasure of our knowledge', khush rahyeh

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    بہت خوبصورت۔۔۔
    مگر ایک بات یاد رکھئے گا۔۔ اگر اللہ اپ کو کسی مصیبت سے گزارے، کسی چیز کی کمی کر دے یا کچھ نہ دے یا دے کر چھین لے۔۔۔ یہ سب آپ کی تربیت بھی ہوتی ہے تاکہ آپ ان چیزوں اور ان سے ہونے والی تکلیف کو پہچان سکیں اور پھر۔۔ دوسروں کی بہتر تربیت کر سکیں۔۔۔۔
    انسان تجربوں سے ہی سیکھتا ہے اور پھر زیادہ بہتر انسان بن سکتا ہے۔۔۔

    مگر جسے اللہ توفیق دے۔۔ آمین ، یا رب العالمین




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    Quote Originally Posted by ~~Ahmad~~ View Post
    bahut khoobsurat tehreer...........
    kuch alfaz mixed hogaye but its allright.. parha ja sakta hai easily ...
    share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahen


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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    Assalaam-O-alaikum

    Bohat khoob @Dolly; aap ki yeh tehreer bohat hi sabaq amooz aur qaabil-e-tehseen hay, yaqeenan aaj humaray maashray ki bohat saari kharabiyon main say aik kharaabi yeh bhi hay kay hum 'dil khool kay' dosray kay achay kaam per 'daad' nahin daitay, kehnay ko tou humaray chand alfaaz hain, magar yeh kisi ki zindagi per bohat musbat asar laa saktay hain... aur bilkhusoos bachoon ki zindagi main jo apnay ibtidayii zindagi main har cheese ko zeh-nasheen rakhtay hain, aur apnay baRoo kay naqsh-o-kadam per chaltay hain.... humari musbat soch, aur humaray musbat iqdaam unn ki soch ko bhi mustahkam aur musbat bannanay main madadgaar saabit ho saktay hain.

    THANKS AGAIN, please keep sharing such great writings to keep adding such great jewels to the 'treasure of our knowledge', khush rahyeh
    bilkul baja farmaya aap ny...aaj kal aise logon ki bht kami hy...jo doosron ko appriciate kryn....thanks for liking...


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    Quote Originally Posted by Farrukh View Post

    بہت خوبصورت۔۔۔
    مگر ایک بات یاد رکھئے گا۔۔ اگر اللہ اپ کو کسی مصیبت سے گزارے، کسی چیز کی کمی کر دے یا کچھ نہ دے یا دے کر چھین لے۔۔۔ یہ سب آپ کی تربیت بھی ہوتی ہے تاکہ آپ ان چیزوں اور ان سے ہونے والی تکلیف کو پہچان سکیں اور پھر۔۔ دوسروں کی بہتر تربیت کر سکیں۔۔۔۔
    انسان تجربوں سے ہی سیکھتا ہے اور پھر زیادہ بہتر انسان بن سکتا ہے۔۔۔

    مگر جسے اللہ توفیق دے۔۔ آمین ، یا رب العالمین
    bilkul.....


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    bahut khoobsurat


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    sabaq amoz tehreer aur heart touching b

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