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    Default Aur Jab Main Marr Jayoon!!!

    Assalaam-O-alaikum SDians,

    Aaj @naz; ki paish kii hoyee nazm kay unwaan ko zehan main rakhtay huway, kuch likha raha hoon, umeed hay aap ko pasand aayay ga, abhi abhi likhi hay iss liye ghaltii ki paishgii maazrat!!!

    Aur Jab main marr jayoon
    Tou tum zara bhi dair na karna
    Dosra ishq kar laina
    Kay tumahra dil bayhal jaayay
    Naya humsafar mil jaayay

    Aur Jab main Marr Jayoon
    Tou merii yadoon ko
    Dil main matt rakhna
    unn sab nishaniyon ko
    kahin lay jaa kar sahil per
    samandar main baha daina

    Aur jab main marr jayoon
    Tou khudha ka shukar ada karna
    Shukranay kay nawafil ada karna
    Kisi ghareeb ko khaana khila daina
    Kisi Bayghar ko sahara ata karna

    Aur jab main marr jayoon
    Tou kisi faqeer kay haatoon per
    Bheek kay chand sikkay rakhna
    Aur tasawurr main mera paykar
    Apnay zehan main laana
    Aur bakhsish ki dua karna!!!


    PS: Pata nahin aaj kia mood hay, bohat koshish ki iss poetry ko funny banaanay kii, magar khudh ba khudh lafz zehan main aatay gayay, aur yeh 'tehreer' tayyar hogayiiiiiiii sorry @naz;

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    Sahi hai jee achi advice hai aap tu bare hi achay well wisher hai apne on k

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    Yeh unn kay liye nahin balkay thefire1 kii jaanib say tamam SDians ko dedicate kii hay

    Quote Originally Posted by attiaahsan View Post
    Sahi hai jee achi advice hai aap tu bare hi achay well wisher hai apne on k

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    sahi

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    nawazish!
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    sahi

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    Bohat khoob.


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    Aur jab main marr jayoon
    Tou kisi faqeer kay haatoon per
    Bheek kay chand sikkay rakhna
    Aur tasawurr main mera paykar
    Apnay zehan main laana
    Aur bakhsish ki dua karna!!!

    mujhe kabhi kabhi yeh sub bheek he lagta hai ...bheek b naih milti kabhi tu...

    parhti jarhe thi or soch rahe thi k kab is nazm ki app rer marey gai...leken ap ne isko bakhs dya sukriya janab

    likha waise acha hia ...jo biyan karne ki koshish ki gaye hia wo acha hai...waise app serious likhna start kardain...
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Bilkul sahii kaha aap nay @naz; aaj kal tou duwaain dainay kay liye bhi insaan kay haath nahin uth-tay...!!

    INSHALLAH pata nahin kal say zindagi nay aik alag direction main sochna shuroo kar dia hay..... shayed umar ka taqaaza hay...... umar jo ho chali hay meri......

    Ab main SERIOUS kalaam hi likha karoonga.... aap ki guzaairsh humaray liye hukum.... aur aap ka hukum sar ankhon per, khush rahyeh

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    Aur jab main marr jayoon
    Tou kisi faqeer kay haatoon per
    Bheek kay chand sikkay rakhna
    Aur tasawurr main mera paykar
    Apnay zehan main laana
    Aur bakhsish ki dua karna!!!

    mujhe kabhi kabhi yeh sub bheek he lagta hai ...bheek b naih milti kabhi tu...

    parhti jarhe thi or soch rahe thi k kab is nazm ki app rer marey gai...leken ap ne isko bakhs dya sukriya janab

    likha waise acha hia ...jo biyan karne ki koshish ki gaye hia wo acha hai...waise app serious likhna start kardain...

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    Shukiriya
    Quote Originally Posted by Ali_ View Post
    Bohat khoob.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    Yeh unn kay liye nahin balkay thefire1 kii jaanib say tamam SDians ko dedicate kii hay

    Khad ho gayi humin nahi chahiye asi dedication rakho apne pass huuun

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