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    yeh aik shair hai...

    mohabbat ki adalat main shikayat kar nahi sakta
    giley,shikwey muqabil hon tu chahat haar jati hai...



    is main jo kha gaya hai wo saaf he nazar araha hai kiya aisa waqie hota hai ?
    shikwey karne se dilon main farq ajata hai ?
    is he shair ko bunyaad bana kar apney ans dijeye.



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    Walaikum Assalaam


    Meri zaati soch iss say kuch mukhtalif hay, main yeh nahin kehta kay 100% iss baat say disgaree karta hoon, magar 100% agree bhi nahin karta.... aap yoon keh lain kay meray liye yeh kehna kay shikhway shikayatain karnay say mohabbat HAAR jaati bilkul aisa hay jaisay main chahta hoon kay main apnay aap main aik musbat tabdeeli laoon, apni soch ko, apnay nazaryeh ko aik behtreen shakal main dhaaaloon aur log meri ghalitiyon ko ujaagar karain, mujhay meray ayab kay baaray main batayain taakay main unn ayab per qaboo paa kar aik positive thinker banoo...

    Yehii choutii see logic yahan hay... meri nazar main SHIKWAY SHIKAYATAIN, apnay MEHBOOB ko samajhnay main, uss ki mohabbatoon ki hadhoon ko samajhnay main, uskay jazboon ki sachayii ko jannay main aur usski ghaltiyon ko nikhaarnay main bohat madad-gaar saabit hotay hain... aur sab say baRh kar jab tak mohabbat main shikway shikaaytain naa hoon tou mohabbat ka lutf bhi tou insaan nahin samajh sakta.... mujhay nahin lagta kay itni chotii chotii baaton say MOHABBAT haar saktii hay.... meray nazdeek yeh choti choti shikaayatain, yeh shikway apnoo say hi kiye jaatay hay taakay hum apnoon kay DIL tak rasayii kar sakain, iss say diloon main farq tou aata hay magar MUSBAT farq, aik aisa farq jo MOHABBAT kay rishtay ko aur bhi ziyada MAZBOOT aur MUSTAHKAM karta hay!

    Mohabbat ko haraaana agar itna AASAAN hota tou aaj shayed yeh MOHABBAT KADDAH iss forum ka aik SPECIAL SECTION na hota!!!

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    Mohabbat tab he achi lagti hai jab yaktarfa na ho...dono fareqeen ko jab mohabbat ho or mohabbat ki rooh ki gehrai se rooh ki sachai se tu mohabbat her roop main achi lagti hia...!!!

    Sawal yeh hai k shikwey karney se kiya mohabbat main kami ajati hai ? dilon main farq ajata hai..?

    jaha tak main sochti hon tu shikwey pyar bharey achey lagtey hian...dono agar aik dosrey ko samjhtey hain aur phir shikwa ata hai tu zahir hia mohabbat main koi farq naih pare ga ...mohabbat main farq tab parta hai jab ap aisa shikwa kar rahe hian jo samne wale main hai he nahi ...jo samne wala kar he nahi raha..baz dafa insan kuch aise khayali paikar bana leta hai apne dimag main k wo jo sochna chahey wo jo samjhna chahey usko wo he samjh ata hai ...tu aise surat main mohabbat maikn farq ata hai...jab aik he bat bar bar ki jaye tu insani fitrat hai k insan feed up hojata hia...us mahol main irritate hota hai ...her insan change pasand karta hia ...sub log aik jaise naih rehty...mohabbat bhi shayd aik jaise naih rehti hamesha...shikwy shikyatain agr had se barh jaye tu zahir hia dilon mian farq ane lagta hai ...pyar bhara shikwa ho tu kisi ko bhi bura nahi lagey ga ..leken insan samjhta he kab hai ...jis ka jo sahi lagta hai wo wohe karta hai ...mohabbat inteha ki chahta her koi hai k us se ki jaye leken yeh bhi dekhy k khud kis inteha tak mohabbat kar raha hia...haan afsani tor per baat karain tu main yehe kahongi k nahi jee aisa kasie hosakta k shikwey karney se mohabbat main farq par jaye ...dilon main farq aney lagey...zahri baat hai main is baat se inkar he karongi...leken agar app practical hokar sochain tu zaida shikwey koi b bardash naih karta..doriyan ane lagti hia...sub se phele tu app mohabbat ki us stage per ho agar k app ko samjhne wala samjh raha hia ap ki baat ko samjh raha hai tu ...aise koi sitatution aye gi he naih ....leken agar us stage per hain ke naih tu ..ap ki suney ga kaun...


    her baat ke bhot sare pehlo hotey hain ...or situations alag alag hoti hian..jis per jab jo jo parti hia insan apne tajrubey ki bina per ans karta hia ...islye her insan apna tajruba jo us per beet chuki hoti hai ya wo sochta hia us ko bunyaad bana kar jawab de raha hota hia...!!!

    islye mera manna yehe hai ke shikwey shikyatain had se barh jaye tu doriyan ajati hian...farq ajata hai...!!!

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    کسی حد تک یہ بات ٹھیک ہے لیکن وہ محاورہ ہے نا کہ محبت اندھی ہوتی ہے تو شاید اسی لئے کہا گیا ہے کہ جس سے محبت ہو اس کی غلطیوں کو
    کئی بار جان بوجھ کے بھی نظر انداز کرنا پڑتا ہے۔۔۔انسان اس معاملے میں بہت کم ظرف ہے کہ اسے جب کسی سے محبت ہو
    تو وہ اس کے عیب بھی چھپا جاتا ہے اور جب کسی سے نفرت ہو تو اس کی چھوٹی سے چھوٹی غلطی بھی زہر لگتی ہے لیکن لگاتار شکوے
    !!!شکایتوں سے کبھی کبھی محبت ہار بھی جاتی ہے اور پیچھے رہ جانے والی چیز بس پچھتاوا ہوتا ہے
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    نہیں جناب۔۔۔۔۔ایسا ہر گز نہیں۔۔۔۔۔جہاں تک میرا ذاتی تجربہ ہے۔۔۔۔گلے شکوے کرنے سے دل صاف ہو جاتے ہیں۔۔۔۔اور جہاں محبت ہو وہاں اگر گلے شکوے نہ ہوں تو محبت میں مزہ نہیں رہتا۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔ہاں مگر گلے شکوے کرنے کے لیے مقابل شخص کا موڈ ضرور دیکھ لینا چاہئے کیوں کہ غصے اور ناراضگی میں کیا گیا گلہ آپ کے گلے بھی پڑ سکتا ہے۔۔۔۔
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    Question : Mohabbat ki adalat main shikayat kar nahi sakta ..
    Gilay shikway muqabil houn to chahat haar jati hai ..


    chunkay shair k baray main pucha geya so mera jawab b shairon se hona chahiye na

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    Shairy main Ghalib se Wassi tak jitni b shairy ishq majazi pe parhi hai us main hamesha mehboob/ muashooq ko sangdil hi paya hai .. Sangdil yani k Pathar k dil ka insaan aisey insaan se ap kiya tawaqo kar saktay hain .. Us se romanvi baat karaingay to us pe majal hai zara b asar ho jaye ... To Gila shikwa to bohat door ki baat hai ..
    Mohabbat to aisa sehar rakhti hai khud k ander k aashiq raigistano ki rait , paharoun ko kaat deta hai .. Par mehboob / muashooq se uff tak nahi karta ..
    Mehboob k aib to ashiq ko nazar hi nahi atay .. agar aib houn b to aashiq aisey aibon ko chupa leta hai k jesey kabhie they hi nahi ..


    Ghalib ne kiya khoob farmaya hai yeh shair :-


    Haan woh nahi Khuda Parast , Jao Woh bewafa sahi ,,,
    Jis ko ho Deen o Dil Azeez , uski Gali main Jaye Kiyun ??


    Gila shikwa to tab hai na jab aashiq main yeh hiss paida ho .. k yeh mehboob ne zulam kiya hai ..


    Ghalib farmatay hain :-


    Maine kaha bazam e naz chahiye Ghair se Tahi ,,
    Sun k Sitam Zareef ne Mujh ko Utha diya k yun ..


    Aksar kaha jata hai k Mohabbat andhi hoti hai .. par yeh kehna ziyada munasib hoga k Mohabbat aashiq ko andha kar deti hai .. usko kuch b nazar nahi ata Mehboob ki ziyadtiyaan , kuch b nahi usko to bas Mehboob hi nazar araha hota hai ..


    aik shair isi noyet se hazir e khidmat hai ..


    Jis Simt bhi dekhun nazar aata hai ke Tum ho
    Ae Jaan-e-JahaaN yeh koi Tum saa hai k Tum ho


    Phir Gilah kiya aur Shikwa kiya .. Mohabbat Gilay Shikwon se bohat oper muqaam rakhti hai .. kaheen agar koi b Mehboob / Muashooq ka amal yaan baat yaan koi aadaa Aashiq ko nagwaar guzarti hai to aashiq bara samajhdaar ban k us k us waqt k us amal main halaat ko samajh leta hai k yeh us ne kis wajah se kiya hoga .. yaan phir darguzar hi kardeta hai .. mudua hi khatam ..


    aik aur shair hazir hai :-


    Apna tou chahaton mein yehi usool hai,,
    Jab tu qabool hai tou tera sab kuch qabool hai..!!!


    Gilay Shikway karnay se Mohabbat main faraq ata hai yaan nahi is baat ka inhisaar is pe hai k Gilay Shikway kon kar raha hai aashiq to apne mehboob k ishq main har tarah ki aziyatain hans k bardasht kar leta hai .. Uff tak nahi kehta mehboob ki har khuwahish sar ankhon pe le leta hai .. to us k Gilay Shikway b itnay khas nahi hotay ..


    Gilay Shikway karnay ka kam to mehboob ka hai .. wesey b mehboob ko hamesha se hi aashiq se gilay shikway hi rehtay hain .. par aashiq ko mehboob ki yeh adaa b bohat lubhati hai .. woh kehtay hain na Gilay Shikway aakhir insaan apno se hi karta hai na ghairon se thori ..


    aik gana is pe yaad araha hai mulahiza farmayen 2 lines hi likh raha ..


    Hum yaar hain tumharay dildaar hain tumharay , hum se mila karo hum se mila karo ..
    koi shikwa agar ho koi shikayat agar ho hum se gila karo , par tum mila karo ..


    Gilay Shikway karnay se mohabbat khatam nahi hoti .. haan par agar yehi gilay shikway dil main rakh liye jayen to phir bohat kuch hojata hai .. badgumaaniyan janam le leti hain .. jo k gilay shikway karnay se ziyada muhlak hoti hain .. Gilay Shikway waqti tor par buray lag saktay hain par yeh mustaqbil ki zindagi ko mazeed mazboot kartay hain .. aur rishta / mohabbat yunhi khalis rehta hai jesa rehna chahiye na k us main badgumaniyun ki milawat ho .. Mohabbat main anaa nahi hoti .. apni aana ko zair kar k dusray ko tarjeeh dena yeh mohabbat hai .. in short muqabil jitnay b gilay shikway houn Mohabbat Mohabbat rehti hai kabhie nahi haarti

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    Mohabbat tab he achi lagti hai jab yaktarfa na ho...dono fareqeen ko jab mohabbat ho or mohabbat ki rooh ki gehrai se rooh ki sachai se tu mohabbat her roop main achi lagti hia...!!!

    Sawal yeh hai k shikwey karney se kiya mohabbat main kami ajati hai ? dilon main farq ajata hai..?

    jaha tak main sochti hon tu shikwey pyar bharey achey lagtey hian...dono agar aik dosrey ko samjhtey hain aur phir shikwa ata hai tu zahir hia mohabbat main koi farq naih pare ga ...mohabbat main farq tab parta hai jab ap aisa shikwa kar rahe hian jo samne wale main hai he nahi ...jo samne wala kar he nahi raha..baz dafa insan kuch aise khayali paikar bana leta hai apne dimag main k wo jo sochna chahey wo jo samjhna chahey usko wo he samjh ata hai ...tu aise surat main mohabbat maikn farq ata hai...jab aik he bat bar bar ki jaye tu insani fitrat hai k insan feed up hojata hia...us mahol main irritate hota hai ...her insan change pasand karta hia ...sub log aik jaise naih rehty...mohabbat bhi shayd aik jaise naih rehti hamesha...shikwy shikyatain agr had se barh jaye tu zahir hia dilon mian farq ane lagta hai ...pyar bhara shikwa ho tu kisi ko bhi bura nahi lagey ga ..leken insan samjhta he kab hai ...jis ka jo sahi lagta hai wo wohe karta hai ...mohabbat inteha ki chahta her koi hai k us se ki jaye leken yeh bhi dekhy k khud kis inteha tak mohabbat kar raha hia...haan afsani tor per baat karain tu main yehe kahongi k nahi jee aisa kasie hosakta k shikwey karney se mohabbat main farq par jaye ...dilon main farq aney lagey...zahri baat hai main is baat se inkar he karongi...leken agar app practical hokar sochain tu zaida shikwey koi b bardash naih karta..doriyan ane lagti hia...sub se phele tu app mohabbat ki us stage per ho agar k app ko samjhne wala samjh raha hia ap ki baat ko samjh raha hai tu ...aise koi sitatution aye gi he naih ....leken agar us stage per hain ke naih tu ..ap ki suney ga kaun...


    her baat ke bhot sare pehlo hotey hain ...or situations alag alag hoti hian..jis per jab jo jo parti hia insan apne tajrubey ki bina per ans karta hia ...islye her insan apna tajruba jo us per beet chuki hoti hai ya wo sochta hia us ko bunyaad bana kar jawab de raha hota hia...!!!

    islye mera manna yehe hai ke shikwey shikyatain had se barh jaye tu doriyan ajati hian...farq ajata hai...!!!

    bilkul sahi likha hay api,"mohabbat main farq tab parta hai jab ap aisa shikwa kar rahe hian jo samne wale main hai he nahi ...jo samne wala kar he nahi raha..baz dafa insan kuch aise khayali paikar bana leta hai apne dimag main k wo jo sochna chahey wo jo samjhna chahey usko wo he samjh ata hai ...tu aise surat main mohabbat maikn farq ata hai..." bohat sachi lines hain,Merey sath hua hay,mainy apni friends khoi hain isi waja se
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hidden words View Post


    bilkul sahi likha hay api,"mohabbat main farq tab parta hai jab ap aisa shikwa kar rahe hian jo samne wale main hai he nahi ...jo samne wala kar he nahi raha..baz dafa insan kuch aise khayali paikar bana leta hai apne dimag main k wo jo sochna chahey wo jo samjhna chahey usko wo he samjh ata hai ...tu aise surat main mohabbat maikn farq ata hai..." bohat sachi lines hain,Merey sath hua hay,mainy apni friends khoi hain isi waja se
    u shikwy karti thi

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post


    u shikwy karti thi

    manaya nahi kiya ...?
    nai api mainy kuch b nai kaha kyun k zara si bat b bohaat bari ho jati thi..itna lad main deti nai thi kisi ko bt usey diya tha,meri choti c bat pe b bohaat kuch bolti wo,bat barhtay barhtay bohaat barh gayi 2 bar..1st tym mainy kuch tym badh khud se mana liya bt 2nd tym mainy b jany diya k zbrdasti kisi ko apnay sath bandh k nai rakh saktay aur har bar larayi ka end friendship khatm karany pe he ho to wo dosti kaisi...mainy kuch b nai kaha,koi shikwa nai,magar us ne bohaat kuch bola jo mainy kabhi socha b nai us ne wo wo bola.. khair ALLAH usey khush rahay
    aur dosri bar to mujhay pata he nai laga k meri dosri friend choti choti baton pe issue bnany wali hay..usey b explain kiya mainy k meri bat ka wo maqsad nai hay jo wo smjh rahi hay bt us ne bohaat short sa jawab de k bat khatm kar di
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hidden words View Post


    nai api mainy kuch b nai kaha kyun k zara si bat b bohaat bari ho jati thi..itna lad main deti nai thi kisi ko bt usey diya tha,meri choti c bat pe b bohaat kuch bolti wo,bat barhtay barhtay bohaat barh gayi 2 bar..1st tym mainy kuch tym badh khud se mana liya bt 2nd tym mainy b jany diya k zbrdasti kisi ko apnay sath bandh k nai rakh saktay aur har bar larayi ka end friendship khatm karany pe he ho to wo dosti kaisi...mainy kuch b nai kaha,koi shikwa nai,magar us ne bohaat kuch bola jo mainy kabhi socha b nai us ne wo wo bola.. khair ALLAH usey khush rahay
    aur dosri bar to mujhay pata he nai laga k meri dosri friend choti choti baton pe issue bnany wali hay..usey b explain kiya mainy k meri bat ka wo maqsad nai hay jo wo smjh rahi hay bt us ne bohaat short sa jawab de k bat khatm kar di

    hmm situation he alag hai ...yehe behter tha shayad...
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