Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast
Results 1 to 10 of 12

Thread: Firaq e yaar

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    Karachi
    Posts
    194
    Mentioned
    7 Post(s)
    Tagged
    1580 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    0
    Rep Power
    6

    Default Firaq e yaar

    Assalamualaikum guys!
    I have written a ghazal and I would like to share it with you

    Lamhay terey firaq ke jab yad aney lagey
    Nain ye khud hi sawaan bahane lagey

    Phir jo pochi waja kisi ne is toofan ki
    Aashoob e chasham ko bahana banane lagey

    Kese batain apna haal e dil hum kisi ko
    Kab se mehboob ke parde aashiq uthane lage?

    Behijaab hue hum tujhey chupate chupate
    Khud ko dhakne me phir zamane lagey

    Bare maan se thama tha hum ne hath tera
    Lakeerain jo milen, ghum phir satane lagey

    Socha tha gulshan banaingey sung tere
    Phir q tm rah me kante bichane lagey?

    Bas gaye tere lakht me, panah gah samajh ke
    Na jane wahan pathar kidhar se aney lagey?

    Intizaar me teri baaran e mohabbat ke
    Gul wafa ke murjhaney lagey

    Jab bhi chaha k chorr den tujhey
    Phley se bhi barh kr tujhey chane lagey

    Bus ab mil jaye to, ya a jae maut!
    Mehnat zindigani ki ab thikaney lagey.

    Qurat-ul-ain.

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Nov 2013
    Location
    Dream Land
    Age
    21
    Posts
    3,220
    Mentioned
    97 Post(s)
    Tagged
    2597 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    3
    Rep Power
    429507

    Default

    /up


  3. #3
    Join Date
    Sep 2010
    Location
    Mystic falls
    Age
    29
    Posts
    52,044
    Mentioned
    326 Post(s)
    Tagged
    10829 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    5
    Rep Power
    21474896

    Default

    Walaikumusalam

    Jab bhi chaha k chorr den tujhey

    Phley se bhi barh kr tujhey chane lagey

    Bus ab mil jaye to, ya a jae maut!
    Mehnat zindigani ki ab thikaney lagey.

    wah wah bohat achi ghazal tehreer ki hai bohat acha laga parh kar
    aur b likheye ap ap likh sakti hain shairy keep writing /up

    eq2hdk - Firaq e yaar

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Karachi, Pakistan, Pakistan
    Posts
    125,914
    Mentioned
    836 Post(s)
    Tagged
    9270 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    1180
    Rep Power
    21474971

    Default



    nice jee.
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

  5. #5
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    Karachi
    Posts
    194
    Mentioned
    7 Post(s)
    Tagged
    1580 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    0
    Rep Power
    6

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Vampire View Post
    Walaikumusalam

    Jab bhi chaha k chorr den tujhey

    Phley se bhi barh kr tujhey chane lagey

    Bus ab mil jaye to, ya a jae maut!
    Mehnat zindigani ki ab thikaney lagey.

    wah wah bohat achi ghazal tehreer ki hai bohat acha laga parh kar
    aur b likheye ap ap likh sakti hain shairy keep writing /up
    Thanku so much

  6. #6
    Join Date
    Jun 2012
    Location
    Karachi
    Posts
    194
    Mentioned
    7 Post(s)
    Tagged
    1580 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    0
    Rep Power
    6

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post


    nice jee.
    thanku so much

  7. #7
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    City Of Light
    Posts
    26,767
    Mentioned
    144 Post(s)
    Tagged
    10310 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    5
    Rep Power
    21474871

    Default




    3297731y763i7owcz zps9ed156a3 - Firaq e yaar

    MAY OUR COUNTRY PROGRESS IN EVERYWHERE AND IN EVERYTHING SO THAT THE WHOLE WORLD SHOULD HAVE PROUD ON US
    PAKISTAN ZINDABAD











  8. #8
    Join Date
    Jun 2010
    Location
    Jatoi
    Posts
    59,925
    Mentioned
    201 Post(s)
    Tagged
    9827 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    6
    Rep Power
    21474903

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Qurat-ul-ain View Post
    Assalamualaikum guys!
    I have written a ghazal and I would like to share it with you

    Lamhay terey firaq ke jab yad aney lagey
    Nain ye khud hi sawaan bahane lagey

    Phir jo pochi waja kisi ne is toofan ki
    Aashoob e chasham ko bahana banane lagey

    Kese batain apna haal e dil hum kisi ko
    Kab se mehboob ke parde aashiq uthane lage?

    Behijaab hue hum tujhey chupate chupate
    Khud ko dhakne me phir zamane lagey

    Bare maan se thama tha hum ne hath tera
    Lakeerain jo milen, ghum phir satane lagey

    Socha tha gulshan banaingey sung tere
    Phir q tm rah me kante bichane lagey?

    Bas gaye tere lakht me, panah gah samajh ke
    Na jane wahan pathar kidhar se aney lagey?

    Intizaar me teri baaran e mohabbat ke
    Gul wafa ke murjhaney lagey

    Jab bhi chaha k chorr den tujhey
    Phley se bhi barh kr tujhey chane lagey

    Bus ab mil jaye to, ya a jae maut!
    Mehnat zindigani ki ab thikaney lagey.

    Qurat-ul-ain.
    achaa start haiii

    keepp it up

    aahista aahistaa nikharr aaatta jaieyy gaaa/up





    تیری انگلیاں میرے جسم میںیونہی لمس بن کے گڑی رہیں
    کف کوزه گر میری مان لےمجھے چاک سے نہ اتارنا

  9. #9
    Hidden words's Avatar
    Hidden words is offline "-•(-• sтαү мιηε •-)•-"
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Location
    Kisi ki Ankhon Aur Dil Mein .......:P
    Posts
    56,915
    Mentioned
    322 Post(s)
    Tagged
    10949 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    4
    Rep Power
    21474899

    Default

    acha likha hay sis
    apni poetry Poet club mai share kartay hain,main wahan move kar rahi hun
    suno hworiginal - Firaq e yaar
    575280tvjrzkx7ho zps19409030 - Firaq e yaarღ∞ ι ωιll αlωαуѕ ¢нσσѕє уσυ ∞ღ 575280tvjrzkx7ho zps19409030 - Firaq e yaar

  10. #10
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    SAb Kya Dil Mein
    Posts
    11,928
    Mentioned
    79 Post(s)
    Tagged
    2306 Thread(s)
    Thanked
    24
    Rep Power
    21474855

    Default

    super - Firaq e yaar


Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •