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    snow poem of the day 6 Augest 2014


    The sudden surge of energy that I feel
    Couldn’t feel it a moment before

    The positive approach that I reveal
    Wouldn’t agree with you holding me back

    Rest is must, if I am to prosper
    Letting you go couldn’t be any harder

    Approaching the door as you fall behind
    Calling my name was not your crime

    Your mode of operation suits me no longer
    The darkness that you provide I crave for no more

    I’ve seen the light before but now I see the path
    For a new era is something, only the Nemesis can start



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    Nice poem.... however, the last stanza of this poem cuaght my attention.

    I read somewhere that a goddess in Greek myth is called Nemesis... however, the meaning in the english dictionary saya that it a source of harm or ruin.. or an apponent who cannot be beaten... therefore, its pretty understood that we are depending our life on an apponent who cannot be beaten and yet starting an area which will be dominated by our opponent... I feel we must be strong enough to face any opponent and live our life free and the way we like and not the way imposed by others

    I dont know if I am understanding it right if you can put some light, it will be appreciated.

    Quote Originally Posted by JiG@R View Post

    The sudden surge of energy that I feel
    Couldn’t feel it a moment before

    The positive approach that I reveal
    Wouldn’t agree with you holding me back

    Rest is must, if I am to prosper
    Letting you go couldn’t be any harder

    Approaching the door as you fall behind
    Calling my name was not your crime

    Your mode of operation suits me no longer
    The darkness that you provide I crave for no more

    I’ve seen the light before but now I see the path
    For a new era is something, only the Nemesis can start


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    V nice

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