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    snow entoon sya banya

    entoon se banay cholhe par rakhi, ghesi hui purani matti ki handiya mein saag apne pani mein Gal raha tha. is boorhi aurat ne neher ke kinare se chuni hui khushk jharion ki tehnion ko toar toar kar cholhe mein phenkna shuru kardiya. woh aag ko isi terhan bharkaye rakhnay ki aik koshish thi. woh matti se lapay hue garam farsh par cholhe ke qareeb aakar baith gayi. paon se chappal utaar kar is ne apne sard halkay halkay suje hue peeron ko dhoop se garam farsh se jaisay kuch hiddat pohanchanay ki koshish ki thi .
    amma is Umar mein bhi panjoo ke bil baithi lakrion ko toar maror kar cholhe mein jhonk rahi thi. aag mein lakrion ke tarakhne aur chtkne ki aawazian aa rahi theen. woh saag ki handi se uthtee bhaap aur is mein uthte ubaal dekhatii rahi .
    " mard kya karta hai tera ?" woh amma ke is achanak sawal par chonki, phir barbarai.
    " kya karta hai ?" is ne jaisay yaad karne ki koshish ki thi. phir kaha" kaam karta hai. "
    " kya kaam karta hai ?" amma ne phir poocha .
    " bahar kaam karta hai." woh saag ko dekhte hue barbarai.
    " pardes mein hai ?" boorhi aurat ne jawabun poocha. woh bhi ab isi ki terhan zameen par baith gayi thi aur is ne apne ghutnon ke gird is ki terhan baazu lapait liye they .
    " haan. .. .. . pardes mein hai." woh isi terhan saag ko dekhte hue boli .
    " to. .. .. too yahan kis ke paas hai. .. sasural walon ke paas? "
    " nahi "
    " phir? "
    " mein kisi ke paas nahi hon." saag par nazrain jamaye is ne be rabt jawab diya .
    " mard ne ghar se nikaal diya hai kya ?" is ne choank kar is aurat ka chehra dekha .
    " nahi. "
    " phir to lar kar aayi hai kya? "
    " nahi" is ne phir be sakhta sir hilaya .
    " to phir yahan kis liye aayi hai? "
    " sukoon ke liye" is ne be ikhtiyar kaha .
    " sukoon kahin nahi hai." woh is aurat ka chehra dekhnay lagi .
    " jo cheez duniya mein hai hi nahi, usay duniya mein kya dhondhna ?" is ne herat se is aurat ko dekha. woh gehri baat thi aur is aurat ke mun se sun kar aur bhi gehri lagi thi usay, jo is jhuggi mein baithi aag mein lakdiyaan jhonk rahi thi .
    " phir bandah rahay kyun duniya mein, agar be sukoon rehna hai? "
    woh is se yeh sawal poochna nahi chahti thi, jo is ne poucha tha .
    " to phir kahan rahay ?" lakdiyaan jhonkti is aurat ne aik lamha ke liye ruk kar usay dekhte hue poocha. woh kuch lajawab hotay hue dobarah saag ko dekhnay lagi .
    " mard kehta nahi wapas anay ko? "
    " pehlay kehta tha. .. . ab nahi kehta. . "
    is ne khud bhi lakrion ke chhootay chhootay tukre kar ke aag mein phainknay shuru kardiye they .
    " be charah akela hai wahan ?" woh aik lamhay ke liye thatki.
    " haan. .. .." is ne is baar madham aawaz mein kaha. woh boorhi aurat ab plastic ke aik shaper mein para howa aatta aik thaali mein daal rahi thi .
    " to akela chore kar aagai usay ?" dhoop mein parre aik gharrey se aik glass mein pani nikaltay hue amma ne jaisay afsos kya tha. woh be maqsad aag mein lakdiyaan phenkti rahi .
    " tujh se pyar nahi karta tha ?" woh aik lamhay ke liye sakit hui ,
    " karta tha. .. .." is ki aawaz be hadd madham thi .
    " khayaal nahi rakhta tha ?" saag se uthti bhaap ki nami is ki aankhon mein utrney lagi thi. usay barray arsay ke baad pata nahi kya, kya yaad araha tha .
    " rakhta tha." aawaz aur bhi madham hogayi thi
    amma ab is ke paas baithi is thaali mein do rotyon ka aatta goondh rahi thi." rootti kapra nahi deta tha? "
    is ne chadar se apni ankhen ragrri. .." deta tha. .." woh apni aawaz baa-mushkil khud sun payi thi .
    " to ne phir bhi chore diya usay? to ne bhi Allah se bande wala maamla kya is ke sath. .. . sab kuch le kar bhi daur hogayi is se. "
    amma ne aatta gondhte hue jaisay hans kar kaha tha. .. woh bol nahi saki thi. .. bolnay ke liye kuch tha hi nahi. .. palken jhapkaye baghair woh sirf amma ka chehra dekhatii rahi .
    " tujhe yeh dar bhi nahi laga ke koi doosri aurat le aeye ga woh? "
    " nahi. ." is baar aatta gondhte amma ne is ka chehra dekha tha .
    " tujhe pyar nahi hai is se ?" kya sawal aaya tha. .. woh nazrain chura gayi .
    is ki chup ne amma ko jaisay aik aur sawal diya .
    " kabhi pyar kya hai ?" aankhon mein selaab aaya tha. kya kuch yaad agaya tha .
    " kya tha." is ne aanso-on ko behnay diya .
    " phir kya howa ?" amma ne is ke aanso-on ko nazar andaaz kardiya tha .
    " nahi mila. .." sir jukaye is ne aag mein kuch aur lakdiyaan dalain .
    " mila nahi ya is ne chore diya ?" is ke mun mein jaisay hari mirch aayi thi .
    " is ne chore diya." pata nahi saag ziyada pani chore raha tha ya is ki ankhen. par aanch aur ansoo dono jagah they. .
    " pyar nahi karta hoga. ." amma ne be sakhta kaha
    " pyar karta tha, lekin intzaar nahi karsaktha tha." is ne pata nahi kyun is ki taraf se safai di thi .
    " jo pyar karta hai, woh intzaar karta hai." jawab khatak se aaya tha aur is ki saari wazahatoon, daleelon ke parakhchay ura gaya tha. woh rotay hue hansi thi, ya phir shayad hanstay hue roi thi. kya samjha diya tha is aurat ne jo dil o dimagh kabhi samjha nahi sakay they usay .
    " is aadmi ki wajah se ghar chore aayi apna ?" amma ne phir poocha .
    " nahi. .. . bas wahan be sukooni thi mujhe. .. is liye aagai." is ne bheegay hue chehray ke sath kaha .
    " kya be sukooni thi ?" woh barasti aankhon ke sath batati gayi. .. amma chup chaap aatta gondhti rahi. .. is ke khamosh honay par bhi is ne kuch nahi kaha tha. . khamoshi ka woh waqfa taweel hogaya tha. .. be hadd taweel. .. amma aatta gondhanay ke baad saag mein doi chalanay lagi thi. .. woh tangon ke gird baazu lapete saag ko ghlte dekhatii rahi .
    " wahan neher ke kinare kyun khari thi ?" amma ne yak dam saag ghot te hue is se poocha. is ne sir utha kar amma ka chehra dekha .
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    Last edited by Sachii Dosti; 09-11-2014 at 04:37 PM.


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