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    New5555 Main aur Meri Tanhai

    Assalam-o-Alaikum Friends Kafi long time ke baad maine aik ghazal likhi kal raat he kuch shair abhi subha likhey hain. Joo dil main aya likhta gaya hon dont know kaisi likhi hai ye aap log he bata saktey hain. waiting for all kind of feed backs. (Please @sheem; tag others, if possible)

    Main aur Meri Tanhai


    Barsoon Ke Baad Ye Raat Phir Laut aai hai,
    Bas Main Hon aur Meri Tanhai Hai

    Matam Kadah Dewaren, Noha Parhti Baharain
    Khudh Se Bhi Na Milaon Nazrain, Kaisi ye Ruswai Hai

    Kar Rakhi Hai Abad Dunya Teri Yadoon se,
    Jab se Qismat ne likhi Ye Judai Hai

    Hai Saza Shayad Younhi Tarpna Har Pal,
    Naam Lena Mohabbat ka Jag Hansai Hai

    Tujhe Bhulaney ki Koshishen Sab Raigaa'n Gayi,
    Kaisi hai Ye Khalish Kaisi Ye Naa Rasai Hai

    Dil Muntazir Raha Har Ik Ahat Par Tera,
    Hai Mohabbat Aaj bhi Tujhse yahi Sachai Hai

    Hoo Jaon Fanaa toe Ajaye ga Qarar Dil Ko,
    Isi Main Shayad Zeeshan ub Teri Bhalai Hai

    Written by Zee Leo

    In My OWN Voice




    Last edited by Zee Leo; 27-08-2015 at 03:19 PM.

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    walaikum salam...

    voice main sun ker or acha laga...

    Naam Lena Mohabbat ka Jag Hansai Hai

    yeh kehna bhool gaye voice main
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    wah wah wah bhot khoubsurat

    mera tu yeh user title hai jis pe une yeh likh di

    keep it up

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    واہ جناب کیا کہنے ۔۔۔۔۔۔ بہت خوب۔۔۔۔۔ ڈھیروں داد و تحسین

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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    walaikum salam...

    voice main sun ker or acha laga...

    Naam Lena Mohabbat ka Jag Hansai Hai

    yeh kehna bhool gaye voice main
    Thankoo Jee.. arey woh DM waley kha gaye thay maine again upload kar ke edit ki hai

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    Quote Originally Posted by sheem View Post
    wah wah wah bhot khoubsurat

    mera tu yeh user title hai jis pe une yeh likh di

    keep it up
    Thankoo sheem Ye Word Main aur Meri Tanhai main toe kafi lambey arsey se bolta huwa araha hon haan ghazal kal likhi hai ..

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    Quote Originally Posted by nizamuddin View Post
    واہ جناب کیا کہنے ۔۔۔۔۔۔ بہت خوب۔۔۔۔۔ ڈھیروں داد و تحسین
    Thankoo broo

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zee Leo View Post
    Thankoo Jee.. arey woh DM waley kha gaye thay maine again upload kar ke edit ki hai
    leken hum ne tu pakar lia
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zee Leo View Post
    Thankoo sheem Ye Word Main aur Meri Tanhai main toe kafi lambey arsey se bolta huwa araha hon haan ghazal kal likhi hai ..
    wo b kafiiiiiiiiii he lambeeey urse se bol rahe hian madam
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zee Leo View Post
    Thankoo sheem Ye Word Main aur Meri Tanhai main toe kafi lambey arsey se bolta huwa araha hon haan ghazal kal likhi hai ..
    acha or mai tu jab se net mai paida hoi tab se keh rhe hon

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