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    candel Writers Club Competition September 2015



    Jaisa k app sub jantey hian k yeh section mar chuka hia..kio k sub he masrof hotey hian or kisi k pass itna waqt nahi hota k wo likh sakey..kaye bar ache ache topic per comp lagaya gaya leken kisi ne hissa na lia tu maine ab ki bar yehe socha k purane he kisi topic ka comp laga deti hon...shyd koi hisa le ley...!!!


    App ko aise tehreer likhni hai jis main app bataye ke Lafzon ki hamari zindagi main kiya ahmiyat hai...!!! Hamare achey bure lafz hamari zindagi main kiya ahmiyat rakhtey hain...!!!


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    @Arosa Hya; ne is comp main hissa liya tha..leken sirf unho ne he liya tha tu hum unka jawab wo bhi is main shamil karey gai...Arosa plz app apna yeh ans yaha copy paste krde..

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    "Lafzon ki hamari zindagi main ahmiyat"

    Lafz .... Lafz hmari zindagi mai boht ehmiyat k hamil hain. inhi ko larri mai pirony se mafhoom banty hain jo hum ek dosry ko smjny k liye , apny khayalat k izhar k liye istemal krty hain.
    Yehi ada shuda lafz hmari pehchan banty hain jese k Hazrat Ali R.A ne farmaya :
    "Baat kro taky tum pehchany jao"

    Alfaz se mil ker mukhtalif zubani tashkeel hoti hain kisi ilaqy k logon k tarz o tamaddun k b akkas hoti hain. Aur zabano k aitbar se dunia ki sb se khobsorat zubanain arbi aur fransisi hain. Aur Urdu dunia ki wahid zuban hai jo "Jazbat k izhar" k liye be panah alfaz ka zakgira paish krti hain. Shairi k lehaz se khobsorat treen isteaary or tashbeeh urdu mai payi jati hai. Aur aik mazy ki baat ye k hmary pas dosri behtreen khasosiyat ki hamil zuban punjabi ki sorat mai hai...panjabi faseeh o baleegh zuban hai ... Dekha gaya English shayer jo apna pegham ponchany k liye itny lambi nazmain likhty rahy wo punjabi k shayir khasosan bully shah apny ek , do shair mai keh gaye jis k bad internatinal level pe punjabi wirsy ko preserve krny ka socha gya.
    Lehaza alfaz ka qomo ki zindagi or saqafat se b gehra jurrao hai..
    Isi tra lafzon ka mafhoom sunny waly ka raddy amal tashkeel dety hain.
    Alfaz ka chanao or shiddat unko moassar bnata hai or hmary lehjy alfaz k sath mil ker bharpor izhar krty hain. Boht martba alfaz se zyada unhain ada krny ka andaz , lehja ada hony waly alfaz ko mukhtalif rang deta hai.
    Alfaz k mafhoom pe "Rober Thouless" ne apny mazmoon "Emotional meanings" mai boht khobsorat wazahat ki hai. us k mutabik alfaz ki mukhtalif iqsam hoti hain kuch neutral (ghair janib dar) jin ka sada sa aik hi mafhoom hota hai.
    Lekin kuch alfaz k dual meanings (Duhray mafhoom) hoty hain. Aur ye hmari dosron ki traf approach ko bakhbi pohnchaty hain.
    Jese ek dhod waly ka cycle kuty k agy se bagny k bayis gir jaye or nuqsan ho to wo aam tor pe usy gali se nwazta hai amooman kutta keh kr. Ab hai to kutta hi lekin gwaly ne osy kutta apni khafgi k sabab kaha.
    Robert Thouless ne masbat or manfi alfaz ki iqsam btayen. Mazeed ye k agar manfi alfaz k sath masbat ka b istemal kr liya jaye to us se apki tanqeed dosry ko buri nhi lagy gi or msg p pohanch jaye ge.
    jese agar hum kisi se ye kahain k tum boht bury ho to shayad usy bura b lagy or islah b na ho
    Is k bjaye agar hum ye kahain k "Ap achy nhi" to is mai masbat(ache) or manfi (nahen) ek dosry ki force ko cancel krty ek sada mafhoom muntaqil krty hain jo kisi ko bura b na lagy.
    Ye alfaz ki taseer hi hai jo sunny waly mai kbi jazba paida krti hai , kbi khushi, kbi takleef or kbi gussa. lehaza alfaz ka istemal boht soch smj k krna nehayat zrori hai tbi ye kaha gya"
    Zuban hi wo she hai jo insan ko jannat ya jahannum mai le k jaye gi.
    Aur pyary Nabi S,A,W ne b ye isi liye farmaya k
    "Musalman wo hai jiski zuban or hath se dosry musalman mehfoz rahain"
    Kiyoun k hum apny alfaz ka jazbati istemal achy istemal se zyada kr jaty hain jese dosron ki burayi,chughli, gheebat, jhoot, dil azari, gustakhi, ba adbi, gussa ka shadeed izhar jis mai dosry k esasat ka khayal nhi rehta. ye sb hmary akhlaq k liye nehayat ehmiyat k hamil hain.

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    Walaikum Assalaam

    Bohat hii khoosburat competition hay aur afsoos iss baat ka hay kay aaj kal likhnay say hum kiyon mehroom hay, main Arosa Hya ko muabrakbad daina chahoon ga kay unhoon nay iss competition main hissa lia .... khush rahyeh...

    Waisay tou Arosa nay bohat hii khobsurtii say lafzoon ki ahmiyat batayii hiii main bhi apnay alfaaz main aur apnay andaz main iss ko bayan karna chahoon ga, Gustaakhii muaaf

    LAFZOON KI HUMARII ZINDAGII MAIN KIA AHMIYAT HAY!!

    Alafaz humari zindagi main bohat ahmiyat rakhtay hain yoon samajh lijyey kay yeh insaan aur haywaan kay darmayan aik aisa farq hay jo humain 'Ashraf-ul-makhlooqaat' kay zamray main khaRa karta hay....

    Zamana-e-qadeem say insaan aik dosray say communcation kay tareeqay daryaaft karta raha hay aur yeh alfaaz hain jinhoon nay humarii soch ko zaban ata kii aur hum iss zaban kay zaryeh apnii takleefon ka, apnay ahsaasaat ka, apni khushi ka, apnay gham ka, mehaz yehh kay humari har ek baat ka izhaar bakhoobhii kar paayay, ..... aur sab say baRh kar jab inhii alfaaz nay LIKHAYII KI SHAKAL paayii tou issay aaj tak duniya ki sab say BEHTREEN DARYAAFT qarar dia gaya, sochyeh kay hum kitni aasaani say apnay alfaaz ko LIKHAYII ki shakal day kar kahinn bhi muntaqil kar saktay hain... aaj kal ki 'WORDS REVOLUTION' duniya main jahan social network itna wasee hay kay baghair Likhay kuch izhaar mushkil hay,.... chahyeh woh literature ho, poetry ho, scientific research ho, educational material hooo yaa phirr koi 'Prem Patarr' alfaaz ka istimaal hiii insaani shaour ko ujagar karta hay, aur kisi ki dil kii baat kisi dill main aisay mutaqil hojaati hay jaisay humarii daulat humakranoon ki jayboon main, pata hiii nahin chalta

    Hum jaisay khaksaroon kay liye tou jaisay hi 'Maujzay' say kam nahii kay kitna kuch likh daitay hain, apnay ehsaasaat, apni bharaas itni aasaani say is SD ki screen per bikhayr daitay hain kay dil per koi boojh hi nahin rehta.... bas kabhi kabhi iss baat ka ehsaas hota hay kay bichaaray paRhnay waaalay kitna parishan hotay hoongain apna sar diwaaroon per day maartay hoon gain kay yeh kis azaab say do chaar ho rahay hain, aik tou itni lambi tehreer upper say ROMAN URDU main...

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