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    candel Ghazal: Ek Sitam Aur abhi, jaan baaki hai

    Ek sitam aur abhi meri jaan baaki hai
    Dil main ab tak ulfat ka nishan baaki hai.

    Zalim mooh se mohabbat ki saza de mujhko
    Kuch to mahrumii-e-ulfat ka sila de mujhko
    Jism ka rooh se rista nahin toota hai abhi
    Haath se sabra ka daaman nahin choota hai abhi
    Abhi jalte hue khwaabon ka dhuaan baaki hai.

    Apni nafrat se pyaar ka daaman bher de
    Dile-gustakh ko mahrume-mohabbat ker de
    Dekh toota he nahin meri mohabbat ka hansi tajmahal
    Abhi bikhre nahin mahki huii yadon ke kanwal
    Abhi tak gulshan main khizan baki hai.

    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 20-10-2015 at 08:54 PM.

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    nice
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    Thanks for liking. Appreciating your
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    Bohat khoobsurat nazm share kii hay aap nay, it was great to read such meaningful words, keep sharing.

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    splendid ..........

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