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    cute new members

    Assalamoalikum freinds meh new hoon. Mera shaire or shayari ka shoq hai per mujhe sahi likhni nhi ati isliyh meri islah koi karde plz meri request hain to all freinds.
    nahi addat Meri logo k agay
    Sir jhukaney ki,
    nahi adat Meri aansoo bahane ki
    Mein agar khafa ho kar
    Tum chor gaiye toh wapas
    annae ki nahi adaat meri

    Tumari khatir mein mohabbat mein sab kuch
    Loota dethi
    Tumhe ruswaa karne ki meri addat nahi
    Tumari yaadien hain mere liyeh bohut aziz
    Tum nikle sakht dil toh kis se gila karein
    Shikwa karna nahi addat meri
    Tumhein de nahi sakhthi mein badua
    Kyoun k dil dukhane nahi adda

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    Walaikum assalaam

    Welcome to SD, aap kii aamad nay iss mehfil main jaisay roshnii bikhair diii.....kitni sunsaan thii rahain.... Main tou samjhnay laga tha kay humaray SD ko kisi kii buri nazar lag gayii hoo kay Koi naya member aata hii nahin aur puranay members meri baaton say already bohat pak chukay hain....

    Khair main tou khudh talib e ilm hoon albatta aap ustad e akbar janab mohatram izzat mua' ab @sarfraz_qamar; aur Aali muqam ustaani @attiaahsan; say raabta kar saktii hain Iss kay ilawa doctorni @Arosa Hya; ko bhii kam naa samjhna woh bhi maahir e shaair o shaairi aur tib hain...

    Khair agar kisi kii taangain kheechnii hoo tou banda hazir hay

    Khush rahyeh, a hearty welcome on SD, we wish you a pleasant stay here.
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    thanks so much meri isla kardena please

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    Quote Originally Posted by feroza View Post
    thanks so much meri isla kardena please
    Yeh loo kar loo baat...

    Mujhay tou khudh islaah kii zaroorat hay

    Baaqi aap ki shayeri ki TASHEEH mundarjabala members kar dain gain aap ghabrain nahin, intizaar karain un kay online aanay ka, main nay mention kar dia hay woh seedhay poohanch jaayain gain yahan aap ki madad kay liye.... Bohat hi khidmat khalaq log hain.
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    shukria nawazish the fire jee bohut acha laga app k post parh kar

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    Quote Originally Posted by feroza View Post
    shukria nawazish the fire jee bohut acha laga app k post parh kar
    Khush amdeed

    Jee mujhay bhi bohat acha laga... Jitna bhi laga aap say thoRa ziyada hi laga
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    Kuch ajeeb se shiary hai hmm aap is k ilwa kuch aur b perh sakty bari pari hai poetry se Google
    And

    Last edited by attiaahsan; 22-12-2015 at 08:59 PM.

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    Aisa Nahi Ke Tumse Mohabbat Nahi Hamein,
    Gam Roz Roz Sehne Ki Aadat Nahi Hamein,

    Har Baar Tumhare Samne Sar Ko Jhuka Liya,
    Aur Phir Bhi Dekho Tumse Shikayat Nahi Hamein,

    Tum Aitbaar Karo Ke Tumhe Chahte Hai Hum,
    Tumhare Siwa Kisi Ki Bhi Chahat Nahi Hamein,

    Hum Jante Hai Tum Bhi Ho Tanha Hamare Bin,
    Auron Se Puchhne Ki Zaroorat Nahi Hamein,

    Tum Qatal Bhi Karo To Aayenge Tumhare Paas,
    Auron Se Dukh Bhi Kehne Ki Fursat Nahi Hamein,

    Kaise Rahenge Bin Tumhare Ab Baat Maan Le,
    Tumhare Bagair Rehneki Aadat Nahi Hamein,

    Bichhde Ho Tum To Dil Par Qayamat Guzar Gayi,
    Ab Intezar Roz-E-Qayamat Nahi Hamein,

    Hum Haar Maan Lenge Tum Mere Paas Aaye To
    Ab Koi Bhi Jeet Ki Khwahish Nahi Hamein,

    Gar Tum Udaas Ho To Kanwal Bhi Udaas Hai,
    Ye Mat Samajh Ke Tumse Mohabbat Nahi Hamein.

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    Wah @attiaahsan; kia baat hay, kia baat hay, kia baat hay
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    Waisay mujhay lagta hay @feroza; nay Ghazal nahin nazm likhnay ki koshish kii hay....
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