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    candel shair or shairi

    Mehne is dil mein jaga di thi,
    Uss shakz ko jisse apna sab kuch manha tha
    Meri khuwabon ki dunia us se hi se saji hui thi
    Chaha tha uss ko hum ne khud se bhi ziyada
    Us se ki chahat mein mehne sab kuch mita dia tha
    Last edited by feroza; 27-12-2015 at 07:47 AM.

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    kaha hay naa.... kafiya say kafiya nahin milaoo.... nasrii shayerii kar loo... pehlay nazmain likhooooo tumahin samajh kiyon nahin aaraha humain pagal kar kay hii dam logiii kia

    Quote Originally Posted by feroza View Post
    Mehne is dil mein jaga di thi,
    Uss shakz ko jisse apna sab kuch manha tha
    Meri khuwabon ki dunia us se hi se saji hui thi
    Chaha tha uss ko hum ne khud se bhi ziyada
    Us se ki chahat mein mehne sab kuch mita dia tha
    SetLifeOnFire - shair or shairi

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    saach mi mujhe samjh nahi aiy zarra asan words mh btado kia likha hai. waise bhi mehne bola tha mujhe shair karna ka shoq hai per sahi krni nhi atti

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