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    candel shair aur shairi

    Assalamoalikum kaise hu sab, yeh meri shairi koi theek kardena mera matlb koi iss ki tasheen kardena.App jante hu na mujhe shoq hai per likhni nhi atti phir bhi likhti rehthi hu nawazish


    Aiy dost samjh lo tum matlb humari dosti ka
    Tum hoe woh joe dour ho kaar be pass rehte hoh
    Doosroe se bohut khass hoe
    Ehsaas hai app k hone kaa
    Jinae Talash karthi hai takdeer tum woh hoh


    Hazaar khushiyan milthi hai app se dost
    Meri zindagi mei tum phool ban kar ai hu dost
    Jahn per mujhe milaye kaante dost
    Tum ne hi woh dour kardiyae dost




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    khosish achi hai bar bar likhnya sya ghalti door ho jiya gi good work


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    hmmm very nice try

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    thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx‚Äč

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    thanksssssssssssss

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    nice likha hai ji

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    thanksssssssssssssssssss

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