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    candel Writers Club Competition June 2016





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    Zaroor..... waisay bhii chand Dino kay fasloon nay bohat kuch sikha dia...... will share personal experience in form of a Nasr soon.
    SetLifeOnFire - Writers Club Competition June 2016

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    Aaj musalsal teesra diin tha kay musalsal taizz chalnay waalii hawaon nay shehar main aik aloodgii sii pehla dii thii… har taraf gard-o-dhool nay gaRiyon ko, darakhtoon kay patton ko, makanoon ko, dunkoon ko gard-alood kar dia tha……. Jiss kii waja say fizaa bohat mayoos lag rahii thii… yuun lagta tha jaisay fiza ka intiaqaal hogaya hay aur har taraf aik gham ka mahool hay….

    Darkhtoon per chehchatay parinday, halki halki baarish, saaf-o-shafaf aur dhuli dhuli saRkain…. Aisay lagta tha kay aaj poori fiza aik khushi ka naghma ga rahii hay aur har kisi ko mohabbat aur khushi ka payaam day rahii hay….. mujhay yaqeen tha kay aaj iss khushgawar mahool main, ussay apnay dil ka haal zaroor suna doonga, uss ko bata doon ga zindagi main teri mohabbat kii kitni zaroorat hay, uss ki khushi say meri khushi munsalik hay, uss kay gham say mera gham munsalik hay… who meri zindagi ka kitna aayham hissa hay…….

    Kareeb say aik car kay kaan main chubbtay horn nay phir say alooda mahool main poohancha dia…. Fiza kii yeh udaasi mujh say bardasht nahin horahii thii… main apni car ko ek taraf park kar kay…. Iss alooda aur ghamgheen mahool main chalta chala jaa raha tha…. Meri manzil kia thii, merii rasta kiia tha, main nay kitna fasla tayy kia tha, mujhay kisi baat ka dehan nahin tha……

    Phir ek sureeli awaaz nay… jiss ko main pehchanta tha…. Yeh awaz meray wajood main shaamil thii… yeh awaz merii khushi kii awaz thiii….. mera naam pukara aur main iss khushqawaar mahool main achanak uss khoobsurat chehray ko dekh kar kuch dayyrr mahv reh gaya….. aur nihayat shaistigii say kaha ‘JEE’……..

    Qareeb baRay gobar kay dhayr main apna pao dekh kar mujhay baRii sharmandigii hoyee, yeh school kii chutti ka time tha tou school kay bachay mujhay iss haalat main dekh kar khoob qeqahay laga rahay thay…. Unn kay qeqahoon nay meri chehray per muskurahat bikhairr dee…. Main yeh dekh kar khush hogaya kay iss ghamaloob mahool main, main kisi kii ka sabab tou bana…. DIL-o-DIMAGH main FASLAY aksar haal-o-maazi ko humesha aik tazaad main rakhtay hain…..
    Alooda fiza jo DIL per chahyii hoyii thii…. Aur khusgawar zindagii ki talash jo DIMAGH main aik khuwaab kii shakal main rounuma thii……


    Zindagi kay har faislay main Dil-o-dimagh dono kii shamooliyat bohat zaroori hay warna aap ka apna wajood apnay aap say duur bohat duur itnay FASLAY per chala jaayay ga kay aap ko apnay aap tak rasayii bhii namumkin lagay gii!!

    Az qalam thefire1 – afsaana-e-hayat – 19/6/2016 (Ghaltii kii paishgii maazrat).
    SetLifeOnFire - Writers Club Competition June 2016

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    Fasly....

    Fasly hmesha ba'maini hoty hain khwah ghar se school tak ka fasla ho ya hostel se department tk ka😜
    Dil o dimagh k darmayan kuch centimeters ka ...
    Ya dil se dil tak ka...
    Zahri fasla ho ya zehni fasla(opinion conflict)...
    Afrad ka androni fasla (generation gap) ya rishton ki mout ka fasla...
    Be-hisi ka fasla (jo loug beron e mulk ja kr peechy chory gaye logon ko bhol jaty hain ek tra Mar jaty hain un k liye ) ya maslahat aur qurbani ka fasla (jo sary zindagi apni family k aram o asayish k liye un se dour guzar dety hain)
    Ek faasla wo b hai jis mai shayir kehta hai:
    "فاصلے قرب کی پہچان ہوا کرتے ہیں"
    Khair ye shayir ki khud ko tasalli hai k koi baat nhi agar mehbob muyassar nhi to ye faasly b hmari sachi muhabbat pe sanad hain wo paas na hoty hoay b meri zaat mai Shamil hai...😝
    Behar-hal ye sb faasly apni jaga BA-MAINI hain...in faslon k hony se asar b hota hain dukh, wehshat ya aziyyat b...

    Lekin aik Faasla aisa B hai jis ka koi azala nhi, jis se barr kar koi khasara nhi, is malal ki had nhi , jis ki aziyyat kbi na khatam honi wali hai jo sahi b jaye gi. Ye hai
    "بندے کا اللہ سے فاصلہ"
    Har insan ka Allah se Tauluk hota hai Wo hmary behad qareeb hai Sheh-rug se zyada qareeb.
    Ye faasla hmari ghaflat ka faasla hai jo akhrat mai hmain Allah se itna dor le jaye ga k Wo hm se kalam b na kry ga aur hum pe Uska ghazab ban k utry ga k hum jahannum tk pohanch jayen ge.
    Ye faasla "neki se gunah" tak ka fasla hai...jb hum burayi mai rachy neki mai sabqat le jany ki khwahish chorr dain ge..
    Ye faasla toheed aur shirk ka fasla hai jo hmain hmary asal se batka dega aur hum na murad ho jayen ge...

    Magar yehi Aik fasla hai jisy khatam krdain to ye hmary tmam dukh aur aziyyat k faslon ki dawa hai k hath thamny Wala koi aur nhi ALLAH hai jis ki traf se hum azmaye jany k liye zindagi k dhoky mai hain aur Usi ki traf lout jana hai (beshak).

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