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    candel **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    Zain Sahib ki nazr..


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    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    itni jaldi katam ..aik ure bad ap ki ghazal parhe hia..maza agaya.

    2nd shair umda hia
    صرف آواز نہیں ، لفظ بھی مقفل ہیں مرے

    سوچ میں ہوں کہ اب تجھ کو پکاروں کیسے

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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    wha wha wha kia batt hi buhat umdha ghzal hi
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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    wah ji wah, bohat achee ghazal kahi hay aap nay, abhi zain sahab ke ghazal parh ker aa raha hun, unhoN ne to khoob likha he hy, aap ne bhi un kee zameen main ghazal keh ker unhen acha khiraj paish kiya.

    donon ghazaloN ka maza aa gaya.
    poochtay ho to suno kaisy basar hoti hay
    rat khairat main, sadqay main sahar hoti hay

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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    waah waah,,kiya kahnay hain yaar,,ghazal likhi hay or kamal kiya,,rawani or taghazzul bay panaah hay..share muntakhib krna mushkil horaha hay..matla sab say umda raha,,boht saari daad tumharay liye ji,,,boht saari ka matlab hay kay itni jitni tumhary daman main na aasakay
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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    Zain Sahib ki nazar..


    lamhabharkesafarkasa0 - **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    arrey wah!!!
    is qadar khoobsurat tohfa merey liye,aor mujhey khabar hi naheen,
    be had mamnoon hoon bhahi is izzat afzaayi ke liye,
    ghazal aap ne bila shubah be had khoobsurat kahi hai,har aek sheir doosarey se baR ke achha laga,aor siwa lutf diya,dheron mubaarak baad aor daad is khoobsurat ghazal ki nazar,qabool kijiye,
    aek chhoti si tajweez bhi hai,agar mumkin ho to dekh lijiey ga,
    sheir #2 ka pehla misra agar yoon kar lain ke......


    dil naheen maanta,be wafa shakhs hai
    jaantey bhoojatey jo dagha de gaya


    to sheir ki khoobsurati baR jaaye gi merey khayaal main,aor wazn main bhi aa jaaye ga,
    is muhabbat ke liye aek baar phir bahot shukriya,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Bhot khubsuart ghazal kaahi hay WL

    Mazeed intazar rahy ga

    FeamNAllah

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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    Aik mudat kay baad aap ki taraf say kuch parhnay ko milla sari tashnagi or shikayat door ho gai boht hi khoob likha or kamal ka likha sadgi rawani rachao rythum sehal magar mouzon alfaz ka chunao sonay per suhaga mukhtasar behar main kia heh kehnay parh kar lutf aa gia boht c daad aap ki is khobsorat kawash ki nazarkush rahain or likhtay rahin

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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    zaberdast poem hai
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    Default Re: **Lamha bhar ke safar ka..**

    superb as usual

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