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    Default Intabaah,(nazam)

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    chand ultey seedhey alfaaz,nazam ki soorat haazir hain,bardaasht kijiye ga,
    aor apni aara dena bilkul naheen bhooliye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,



    intabaahaeknazam - Intabaah,(nazam)
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Intabaah,(nazam)

    wah bohat hi zaberdast

    kiya baat hai maza agaya parh k

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    Default Re: Intabaah,(nazam)

    mohbbat tum nahi karna

    yeh apnay bas mein shayed nahi hota

    aapki iss zaberdast c peom nay humein dukhi kar diya
    ranisrequest - Intabaah,(nazam)

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    intibah......pekar...ranjour...mojab......aazaar............ paimber..tairgi..........pehlay in alfaaz ko hamein explain karein...zara detail mein!

    and secondly............hon gay yeh ultay seedhay alfaaz.....lekin hein laajwab
    superbly written!

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    Default Re: Intabaah,(nazam)

    Quote Originally Posted by sheem View Post
    wah bohat hi zaberdast

    kiya baat hai maza agaya parh k
    bahot shukriya Sheem saahiba,ke aap ne waqt nikaala,aor khoobsurat alfaaz main pazeeraayi ki,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    mohbbat tum nahi karna

    yeh apnay bas mein shayed nahi hota

    aapki iss zaberdast c peom nay humein dukhi kar diya
    ummmmm.........shaaid aap theek hi kehti hain,
    nazam pasand karney ka be had shukriya,
    lekin mera maqsad aap ko dukhi karna naheen,aap ko mehzooz karna tha,aor apney mehsusaat main shareek karna tha,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    intibah......pekar...ranjour...mojab......aazaar............ paimber..tairgi..........pehlay in alfaaz ko hamein explain karein...zara detail mein!

    and secondly............hon gay yeh ultay seedhay alfaaz.....lekin hein laajwab
    superbly written!

    sab se pehley to nazam ki pasandeedagi aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
    mujhey bahot achha laga ke aap ko jin alfaaz ki samajh naheen aayi,aap ne pooch liya,jab tak alfaaz ka matlab na pata ho,kissi bhi qisam ki shaairy maza naheen deti,aap ke is sawaal se aek baat to bahot waazeya huyi ke aap shaairy ko samajh kar parna chaahati hain,aor rasman wah wah naheen karti,jo ke bahot achhi baat hai,

    alfaaz ka matlab kuchh yoon hai,......

    intibah......khabardaar karna,ya hona, aagaahi,
    pekar.....chehra,shakl,soorat,
    ranjour...bimaar,afsurda,maghmoom,
    mojab......sabab,baais,wajah....wesey...farz,waajib,waajib karney waala,laazim karney waala,..ke ma.anon main bhi istamaal hota hai,
    aazaar......dukh,bimaari,marz,takleef,sakhti,
    paimber....peghaam pohanchaaney waala,......******bar,ya nabbi bhi keh saktey hain,
    tairgi........taareeki,andhera,sayaahi,

    itna kaafi hai ya mazeed wazaahat ki zaroorat hai,.....agar mazeed zaroorat mehsoos karain to bila jhijhak poochh sakti hain,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: Intabaah,(nazam)

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    ummmmm.........shaaid aap theek hi kehti hain,
    nazam pasand karney ka be had shukriya,
    lekin mera maqsad aap ko dukhi karna naheen,aap ko mehzooz karna tha,aor apney mehsusaat main shareek karna tha,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    yah toh aapki shayeri ak husan hai, k wo kisi k jazbaat ki hu bahu tarjumani karti hai

    aapki duaoon ka be-hadh shukriya
    ranisrequest - Intabaah,(nazam)

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    Default Re: Intabaah,(nazam)

    kiya khoob lafzon ka jaado jagaya hay yaar jaani!lagta hay jesay kisi musawwir nay apnay bursh say,nihayet nazakt say mohabbat naam ki haseena kay nain naqsh banaiy hain,,nazm hay goya naqsha gari hay...mery pas daad kay liye alfaaz naheen...bas itn akhon ga kay ye nazm naheen balkay aik tasweer us haseena ki jis ka naam mohabbt hay!
    love thou - Intabaah,(nazam)

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    Default Re: Intabaah,(nazam)

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    sab se pehley to nazam ki pasandeedagi aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
    mujhey bahot achha laga ke aap ko jin alfaaz ki samajh naheen aayi,aap ne pooch liya,jab tak alfaaz ka matlab na pata ho,kissi bhi qisam ki shaairy maza naheen deti,aap ke is sawaal se aek baat to bahot waazeya huyi ke aap shaairy ko samajh kar parna chaahati hain,aor rasman wah wah naheen karti,jo ke bahot achhi baat hai,

    alfaaz ka matlab kuchh yoon hai,......

    intibah......khabardaar karna,ya hona, aagaahi,
    pekar.....chehra,shakl,soorat,
    ranjour...bimaar,afsurda,maghmoom,
    mojab......sabab,baais,wajah....wesey...farz,waajib,waajib karney waala,laazim karney waala,..ke ma.anon main bhi istamaal hota hai,
    aazaar......dukh,bimaari,marz,takleef,sakhti,
    paimber....peghaam pohanchaaney waala,......******bar,ya nabbi bhi keh saktey hain,
    tairgi........taareeki,andhera,sayaahi,

    itna kaafi hai ya mazeed wazaahat ki zaroorat hai,.....agar mazeed zaroorat mehsoos karain to bila jhijhak poochh sakti hain,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Assalamo-Alekam!
    Jazak ALLAH Khair!
    Bohat achi explantions di hein aap nay, hamein samjh aa gayen sab words.
    Khush Rahiye and keep teaching us!

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