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    Default eik desi perdesi sa...

    ay ajnabi hawa
    meray des ki galiyon say
    guzerna toh zra
    dekhna
    jahan tumein milay
    eik desi perdesi sa
    apna sa be-gana sa
    ujaar banjarr asheyanoun sa
    bas wahien meri manzal hai
    mera toota phoota dil hai
    chupkay say ja k mera bataana unnhein
    wo heraan ankhein
    mager udas ankhein
    mera poochein gi
    tujh say ann-ginnat sawal poochein gi
    wo barsein gi meray ziker par
    meray haal ka kuch na pata dena
    bas tum unnhein itna bata dena
    k ansoo bahaanay ko
    kuch bacha nahi
    koi yaad nahi
    koi aas nahi....
    Last edited by Rani; 12-04-2008 at 02:21 AM.
    ranisrequest - eik desi perdesi sa...

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    Default Re: eik desi perdesi sa...

    bohat zabardst likha hay..

    hamesha khush rahoo

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    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Aap to acha likh laytay ho MAshalah

    FeamnAllah

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    Default Re: eik desi perdesi sa...

    v zaberdast Rani..

    SD ki Basanti

    Chal DhanoOo

    I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....

    53339010150654137193873 - eik desi perdesi sa...

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    Default Re: eik desi perdesi sa...

    bahot khoob Rani,be had khoobsurat nazam kahi hai aap ne,nazam ka khayaal,aor khayaal main tasalsul bahot achha laga,alfaaz ka chunao bhi bahot khoob hai,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,is khoobsurat nazam par,
    mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH mazeed taraqi paayain gi,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: eik desi perdesi sa...

    bht hi khoob bht acha rani jeee
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    Default Re: eik desi perdesi sa...

    wahh.. achi nazm kahi.. likhti rahiye.. ke aur bhi nikhar aaye ga.. daad hazir hai .. qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - eik desi perdesi sa...

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    waah raani saahiba! aap nay to aik dam kamaal hi krdiya...ye to pichli nazm ki nisbat boht ziyada achi nazm kahi hay aap nay,,sach poochye waqae maza aaya parh kay! boht saari daad aap kay liye
    love thou - eik desi perdesi sa...

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    Zabardast

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    Default Re: eik desi perdesi sa...

    bohat acha likha hai dear

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